Reviews for A New Star |
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![]() ![]() yay ! another PERN story from you. I am pleased, and smiling happily. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED your story. It has a great theme, characters, plot, suspense, and ending. Thank you again for writing it. I'll check out your novel also and have put you on my favorite authors in case you write about Arryn again. Wodokeka (that means skillful artist in Campfire Girls' terms) LOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you probably don't want to fix this at this late date, but it was hard to follow the mental communications without the italics. Otherwise very good story so far. I'm loving it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm rooting for Vell. Great story so far especially with the character development. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great idea and really well written, loved both your stories about the green/gold! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you. Cool stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulations on publishing your book! I hope you do well. And thankyou for the time and effort that went into this story, especially when you were writing your own book. You are awesome, and I to say goodbye to your pern story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope can reunite the two pairs again. Did she get a recipe? |
![]() ![]() ![]() But who is this rouge dragon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did they do something to this dragons mind, too? Poor dragon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They just need a lot he dragons to attack. Flame them. Take them between forever! Protect your queen Bendon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't let the new weyrleader be the bad guy. Please? I hope the new queen riders ability to sense connections will help the poor pair. And her, as I assume they are going to attempt to steal her queen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was unexpected. Is that even allowed if the mating flight wasn't declared an open one? Is he allowed to be there? I' it wasn't K'lin but ok with you the obvious choice :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It might have been better if they had both died! Do these hidden players have a way to decompress the dragon, or are they just going to imprison her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() What are these hidden players up to? |