Reviews for A New Star |
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![]() ![]() You should hear the massive sigh I've just let out after finishing this. I read both fics straight from beginning to end with only six hours sleep between! Again, wonderful job, this one had lots of twists and turns where you give just enough where we think we know what's happening; that we've been clever enough to suss it out when actually something different occurs. I was right about senia though! I'm glad to hear about your novel, you have a lovely writing style and I will definitely look out for it. Thanks again! X |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you added a brown rider we'd have them all. ;D Nice way to end the story. "they stood together for a moment: bronze-rider, blue-rider, green-rider and gold-rider, watching the dragons of Benden fly through the vivid blue sky." Very good way to end it, if you ask me. I love how you chose to end this story with Sh'let and Parnileth being reunited. It was probably one of the sweetest ways to wrap everything up. Getting the final chapter from Arryn's POV is just like old times, and the only POV this chapter could have been in, so I'm glad you did it like this. This story has been an amazing ride. I love both the story story and this one. They're among my favorite of all the Pern FF I've read, and I actually made PDFs of them so that I could put them on my Kindle to read when I'm in the mood for a good FF from Pern. It might have taken me a while to finally sit down and review, but that doesn't mean I don't appreciate the story, even if I have been waiting two years for the ending. *Grins slightly* You finished it, and that's all that matters in the end. You're an amazing author, and I'm going to be on the lookout for that book of yours! Pass on an Amazon link, if you can, when it comes out so that I can get it on my Kindle. ;) I'll be re-reading this for YEARS to come! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant! I have absolutely loved reading both of your pern stories. Definitely some of the better pern fiction i have ever read ;D. I would love to read more of this, maybe another sequel? Just me being hopeful ;D. But I would like to see an epilogue for this one, though I have no helpful ideas for you at the moment. Still really love this story even if you don't add an epilogue. Would like to another pern fiction from you as well, even if its unrelated to this; you're a really good writer ;D. Keep up the fantastic work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found your stories and they are just wonderful. Not only are you writing skills excellent, but your charaters are completely believable. I'll watch for your novel to come out soon and keep my fingers crossed for you that it sells lots and lots of copies :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A wonderful sequel to A Change in the Stars. I am glad both stories were completed before I began reading them as I am rather impatient with WIP's and savor the full, uninterrupted feast instead of small bites. Throughly enjoyed this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehe brilliant, loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I can't believe it's over. It has been absolutely wonderful getting to read your story and congratulations on the book! Since I hunted you down on facebook ) i'll be sure to keep my eyes peeled for it. I think you tied everything up very neatly although something fluffy and cute in the epilogue wouldn't bother me. Good luck in all of your writing adventures and i'll keep my eyes out for any new stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yea. You did not kill Arryn and the dragonriders who lost their connections are back together again. Great story I truly enjoyed it. And congrats on publishing your book. I will keep I an eye out for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Cheers happily* Yeah! The dragon and rider were reunited! :) Please do the same with the little blue and his rider. Sorry, but it's just so sad that I kind of want to see them united again, even if it's just Arryn seeing a happy boy. Well done writing from Lira's point of view. It makes a change and an interesting view. Definitely interesting hearing her thoughts on being a female blue-rider. It was amusing when T'naril realized Lira was the blue-rider and H'rath the green. Well done with that part. Gave some amusement in the chapter that had some sharp areas. I like how you didn't just have T'naril automatically safe, but they had to fight to save him. More realistic, and definitely brought in some tension to the chapter. A very well done chapter. I'm looking forward the seeing Arryn again, though I must admit that I don't exactly want this story to end yet. It's so amazing. :) I was really happen when I saw the update in my inbox. :D Pulling an all-nighter, which shall kill me at school tomorrow but oh well, and this was a nice distraction to keep me awake. By the way, awesome speed on the update. :) Makes up for the longer breaks lately. |
![]() ![]() I'm 75 years old and would like to read the end of this story before I get too much older. I enjoy all of your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! Please ma'am, may we have more? |
![]() ![]() Yay, more story! Always a treat when a good author returns. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a wonderful thing to wake up to, and an even more wonderful thing to come home to remembering. In fact, I re-read the end of the story on my Kindle today, and I had just begun re-reading the first story. You see, I had rehearsals after school for 5 hours, and I'm not doing much for a lot of it, so plenty of reading time. :) This was well written and gave us at least some information on Arryn. I'm glad the rider is okay and that they might be able to reunite rider and dragon, both bronze and blue. The reaction of Vell was realistic and a good read. I just wish you had shown Arryn a bit more, but it was reasonable not to given how she was badly hurt and still in the infirmary. I just hope you update soon so that we find out how Arryn and Maventh are doing. I'm truly hoping they'll survive and be able to fly again. :) Plus, I wanna see those riders/dragons reunited. :D Loved the chapter. Like I said, it was well done and, while not completely worth the wait, it makes up for the year-long absence. Especially if you update again soon, hint-hint. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so very happy to see you again! I had to go back and reread a little bit but so I could refresh the story in my mind, but that wasn't a problem at all. In fact, I went back and reread both stories So, no rush with the next chapter but I would love to see what happens next! I hope everything's good with you and I hope to see your alert in my inbox here soon. D |