Reviews for First Kiss: A collection of Jeslie oneshots
Teralian chapter 5 . 1/3/2008
I've read all of your oneshots and have to say that you're really talented! I usally don't like stories where Leslie dies but these were really well written and liked them alot. I like the LDD oneshots most I think and my favorite is this chapter "Ladder to Paradise" so far. I never could have expected that that Leslie was actually the real one and the ending was perfect. Keep up the good work!
MadTom chapter 5 . 1/2/2008
Wow! That was terrific! I never expected this ending, never expected Leslie Barlow to be the REAL Leslie. I never watched Korean soap operas when I was stationed in Korea 27 years ago (they never had them with English subtitles or dubbing anyway!) but this seems like a Korean drama, all right!

To me, all "Leslie washed up alive downstream with amnesia while Bill and Judy accepted her death without ever finding her body" storylines (and there are a few out there) stretch the limits of plausibility, but I'm usually willing to suspend disbelief, and this is one of the better ones regardless!
Sky of Darkness 64 chapter 4 . 9/27/2007

i just wanted you to know that i really like your story...

i hope you will write another chapter of it cuz i am really looking forward for the other one...



danayoki chapter 4 . 9/13/2007
YES! YES! Now THAT'S the story I'm talkin' about! WHOO HOO!
RevivedSin chapter 4 . 9/13/2007

I could imagine the words "Falcon PANCH" in my head when Jess punched Zack. Is that odd? No, probably not.

Whee! Not bad.
Kryptale chapter 4 . 9/11/2007
You know what's awkward? I went to High School with a kid named Zack Thompson and he matches the description in this story, though he was closer to Leslie in social standing than the Zack Thompson described here.

Great oneshot though. I'm glad you finally wrote one where Leslie doesn't die, even though it goes against your principles. We all know Leslie dies in the book and film, and it makes the story incredibly sad, touching and beautiful. For those of us that want to explore what Leslie and Jess could have had on down the road had that particular tragedy been averted, this is really our only way. Thanks for popping this one out, because all of your shorts have had amazing Jeslie, and reading one of them where it actually "lasts" is a breath of fresh air.
Kryptale chapter 3 . 9/11/2007
As much as I will always dislike Leslie's death, this was a wonderful story. Instead of letting us see how Leslie and Jesse's relationship could have progressed, it offers the closure on the character that we never really got in the book or film. Bravo.

Oh, nice Harry Potter reference, by the way.
armoboy chapter 4 . 9/10/2007

You finally did a happy ending!

You are a really good writer and you should keep it up!

Good luck writing!~
Freestyler75 chapter 4 . 9/10/2007
Thanks this was a nice LDD story. (I dont like to read fanfics where Leslie dies anyway, I think they are simply pointless - one really depressing story (the original) is quite enough)
MadTom chapter 4 . 9/9/2007
Finally! A real LDD oneshot in your collection! I like it!
KageKyro chapter 4 . 9/9/2007

Absolutely Spectacular!

thats all i can say
RevivedSin chapter 3 . 9/5/2007
HAR Leslie became Dumbledore in that fine moment.

Well done, well done.
RevivedSin chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
ARGLE! This is a totally "Leslie dies after Jess and Leslie show their true emotions to each other" fanfic isn't it?


Damn, I have to stop being hooked on those types. D:
califstooge chapter 3 . 9/5/2007
The 3 chapters I've read are absolutely brilliant.
blindedlegacy18 chapter 3 . 9/2/2007
wow...oh wow oh wow oh wow, i did not think anyone could write such a beautiful story about jess after leslie died but you have done that, you have officailly braught me down to bawling. i love this one alot, and i can't wait for the one where you actually dont kill her. Kudos!
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