Reviews for Roadtrip
Sam x chapter 9 . 6/11/2013
No structure or substance, incorrect spelling grammar and punctuation. You can tell you're young, but please learn how pregnancy actually works.
SensuallyPassionate chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Hun, nice story. but your grammer is horrible. Please revise and i am trying to word this the best i can. And also you cannot get pregnant in 24 hours. One, its not possible for it takes three days for thr semen, sperm cells, to travel from the vagina to the uterus. Thats just phase story never the less
yamisangel101 chapter 16 . 10/7/2007
Well that was interesting... :D
endofstory.thankyou chapter 16 . 10/7/2007
ahh!i cant wait until the second one!good job!
yamisangel101 chapter 14 . 10/5/2007
Wedding Bells! Yay! Can't believe that Yasmin would sleep with Koby and Cameron though. Oh well great new chapters...
endofstory.thankyou chapter 14 . 10/5/2007
awhh.i bet its koby]]
lightuptheskyxo chapter 14 . 10/5/2007
oh my gosh. this story is so so so so amazing. please continue
endofstory.thankyou chapter 13 . 10/4/2007
danng this is good
yamisangel101 chapter 12 . 9/16/2007
:O Yasmin! *slaps her* Wow she's moody is she pregnant too? Great job on another chapter.
yamisangel101 chapter 11 . 9/13/2007
Oh My Gosh! they left them there? lol they're not gonna be too happy. :D Keep writing!
yamisangel101 chapter 9 . 9/10/2007
YaY! He finally came around! He just seems like the fathering type y'know? Anyways can't wait to read more. :D
endofstory.thankyou chapter 7 . 9/8/2007
that was sweeT!continue
yamisangel101 chapter 7 . 9/8/2007
I can't see Dylan denying it forever... when it's born will he turn around? *starts crying* anyways, great chapter. Keep it coming.
yamisangel101 chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
lots of drama in this chapter... can't wait to see more. :D
endofstory.thankyou chapter 6 . 9/5/2007
omg! is dylans tenth..
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