Reviews for Untouchable
SP777 chapter 1 . 5/19/2017
I actually wish there was another part. :-)
pennamesareforfancypeople chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
LOL matsuda XD
nekazowa chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
i have to admit, until the matsuda point i was completely lost. lol i had NO idea what the attempts were xD poor, poor Matsuda :]
TenshiXXX chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Aw, poor Matsuda! L is so mean to him!
FrigidSnow chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
O.o... Light/Matsuda? Traumatizing...
Raimuboy chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
...matsuda?... hahahahaha! genius.
Sonoko chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
BWHAHAHA~ Raito is such a manipulative uke. And poor Matsuda~ he should have known L is VERY possesive. XD
Mantinas chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Great story!
sami1010220 chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
hahahha, omg, that was hillarious! poor matsuda, lol.
LoveOverAnime chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
what did matsuda want to touch anyways
Count Napula chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
I almost wish Matsuda succeeded...
PrincessChii chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
Oh, I loved this. Torturing poor Raito is always fun (and makes for one amusing read)! L is so very, very evil, but I'm glad he got a little (or maybe that's an understatement, haha) possessive over Raito at the end. Adding this to my faves because it made me lawl lots and it exudes hot. xD
Serria chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
XD Oh no! L is so cruel. Poor Raito was really suffering there... no sex for six days? I love how defensive L suddenly got though, when Matsuda entered the picture. Ha, ha, "my property is only my property", that's awesome. This fic made me smile, good job and good writing! :-)
phoenix of hell chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
*falls out of her chair laughing* Clean up the WHOLE building? In one day? Hahaha. And Raito's attempts, really... Poor guy. How did they managed to make such a deal? What did Raito do to deserve such a punishment? Anyway, great story, really liked it!
TNWanderer chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
As always you made me cry with laughing... Oh he tension, the desperation... I felt sorry for Raito at some point, and cruel cruel L... I love him. I love your works. Very well done again.
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