Reviews for The Paranoia Complex
XticktickboomX chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
That last line gave me chills...*shivers*
songs chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
creepy, yet gorgeous.

adore it.

3 nora
LiverQuiver chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
Holy crap, that last stanza gave me th s.

It's nice how you explained her thoughts as to understand what she thought about the situation, and then at the end you unveiled that she was crazyy.



Hm. I wrote a song called The White Room for muh band.

Devil Lace chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
gaah its so amazing DD



i hope you write more like this, its so amazing and suspenseful and pretty.

-loves it more-
black wallflower chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
M. Delicious.

This was just lovely,

and very poetic~
Ellie-ellie chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
def. a fave

great job :)
i AM the Random Idiot chapter 1 . 8/26/2007

This is instantly win.
Cheerful-Pessimist chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
COOL! and very cleverly done
Mousewolf chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
keyblade, keyboard, keyblock to rubble

how can you marry when your husband’s a tart

boys with books who cannot spell

pretty girls that lose their head

boys with books they go to hell

different song for a different wail

how can he marry you without his heart

different boy with a different tail

redheads are loki, seth, and lae

pretty girls in blonde and red

keyblade, keyboard, blonde boys are trouble

redheads are trouble, whatever they say

Standard disclaimer applies; please leave ice in all the wood sheds. And don't let the man hit you on the way out.

I like.
Gray-Rain Skies chapter 1 . 8/23/2007

This...rocked. For seriously. I mean, it was so intense, and really sucked in my attention. I couldn't believe how captivating this was, and, I mean, you just wrote it so well. Like how there seemed to really be something off with Kairi, and how you carried the suspense all the way to the end, and the mystery you shrouded Axel with. It just owned. Amazing job; I loved this.
silver moon droplet chapter 1 . 8/23/2007

i...i can't explain was amazing...every line, every detail. it had me.

it was beautiful & frigtening.

oh so pretty.

lovely work.