|Reviews for The Paranoia Complex|
| XticktickboomX chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
That last line gave me chills...*shivers*
| songs chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
creepy, yet gorgeous.
| LiverQuiver chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
Holy crap, that last stanza gave me th s.
It's nice how you explained her thoughts as to understand what she thought about the situation, and then at the end you unveiled that she was crazyy.
Hm. I wrote a song called The White Room for muh band.
| Devil Lace chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
gaah its so amazing DD
i hope you write more like this, its so amazing and suspenseful and pretty.
-loves it more-
| black wallflower chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
This was just lovely,
and very poetic
| Ellie-ellie chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
def. a fave
great job :)
| i AM the Random Idiot chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
OMFG STEPHEN KING!
This is instantly win.
| Cheerful-Pessimist chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
COOL! and very cleverly done
| Mousewolf chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
keyblade, keyboard, keyblock to rubble
how can you marry when your husband’s a tart
boys with books who cannot spell
pretty girls that lose their head
boys with books they go to hell
different song for a different wail
how can he marry you without his heart
different boy with a different tail
redheads are loki, seth, and lae
pretty girls in blonde and red
keyblade, keyboard, blonde boys are trouble
redheads are trouble, whatever they say
Standard disclaimer applies; please leave ice in all the wood sheds. And don't let the man hit you on the way out.
| Gray-Rain Skies chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
HOLY JESUS, CONSTANCE!
This...rocked. For seriously. I mean, it was so intense, and really sucked in my attention. I couldn't believe how captivating this was, and, I mean, you just wrote it so well. Like how there seemed to really be something off with Kairi, and how you carried the suspense all the way to the end, and the mystery you shrouded Axel with. It just owned. Amazing job; I loved this.
| silver moon droplet chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
OH MY FROG LEGS.
i...i can't explain this...it was amazing...every line, every detail. it had me.
it was beautiful & frigtening.
oh so pretty.