Reviews for Exodus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwwwwwww, this is really cool! And simply awesome, for lack of better words. It's very well written, and the plot is genius! And the way Harry and dracos relation ship developed seemed so real. You described and wrote it very well and convincing :) great job! Thank you very much for sharing this with us :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Harry he must have looked so broken in that alleyway |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh poor Harry ;( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah I suppose I'd get angsty being holed up 24/7 too |
![]() ![]() ![]() Two very good questions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry should not jump to conclusions seeing as he does not like it done to him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe the random "wand" conversation always cracks me up every time it is used in a story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow -why was Harry so horrible to Draco. You'd think after being beaten to a pulp he would show some human emotion. Draco looked as though he may actually have been nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I smell trouble! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank goodness Stan was there to help him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanted to cry so badly at this chapter, the abuse was brutal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this story! Can you make a sqeuel? Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved it it was so beautiful! |
![]() ![]() Hey so I just wanted to tell you that I dunno why you got flames, I thought this story was pretty good. I totally love it when people leave cliff-hanger plots, it definitely works for me every time; and I happen to like writing the same way. I thought it was good that you had Harry and Draco's building attraction for each other be gradual, because as much as I love slash, it's more believable when people take their time developing the relationship between these two. They were, after all, mortal enemies. I'm glad Harry didn't get raped, and I'm also glad Vernon wasn't sexually abusive to Harry because I've read stories like that and it's a bit hard to stomach. Anyways, great work! Keep it up! Drarry Queen |