Reviews for Exodus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I realy liked this story It was smiple and short but i liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() hiya, tbh i think the story wud do so much better as a slash cause you can explore more things with them, but i meen its you choice. x |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story, i don't know if their'sa sequel or not, but hopefully there is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, yoo know this just SCREAMS Epilogue or something of that sort XD I'm not eating Spag Bol - thank god otherwise I'd have spat it all over the screen when Lucius Crucio-ed Harry Gr... I love Unforgivable!Harry -sigh- And Draco .. -double digh- From Me x |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found it sort of strange that Harry had changed for the better so he was torturing people. I really liked this story because whenever there is a Harry gets abused story he always ends up ridiculously week and feable but in this he ends up strong. And after Harry done the wandles magick Lucius shouldn't have let his guard down again. That's his problem he always underestimates people, although I do actually like the guy I say write a sequal! Cya |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you know the first time I heard the word edgeways was in church, I still remember it now, sort of. Sorry I'm meant to be commenting on this story. I would like to say, that's just like Harry to get one over on the death eater, somehow, he always manages to do it, even if it makes them more furious in the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now the death eaters! Oh no! and that's not sarcastic, it's supposed to be. I wiil review each chapter to the last because I know how nice it is to get reviews for finished stories. Well I don't but some told me that once. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I have no idea when you updated this but the story is already ended! Well I'm going to read on to find out what happens. It's getting really exciting, a traitorous gang member by the name of Nicholas. Oh god I sound so sad! Well I can't say update soon so I'll say write another story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really good, I hope you do a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was good. If you ever do decide to have a sequel, message me, I wanna read that too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say I wasn't expecting it to end there, good fic though and I hope you do a sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this! there must be a sequel, because this cliffhanger CANT be the end. anti-death eater league, i would SO join. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ROFL grotty... i cant wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() B... let them figure out seperately, then A for the communication. But hey, it's your fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A) Yes, but THEN b should happen. Hurt/Comfort rocks! |