A not much of a review but it's true. A

AH a cliffhanger! Cant wait to read more. your chapters are too short, but fairly good descriptions...

loved it... less errors this time, se bien! :) Stan and Ern to the rescue!

it was very good, nice idea. i spotted some grammatical errors, maybe you should get a beta? *bats eyes* Ahem, good job

you so need to write a sequal about when they are at school

ahh got to love a happy ending. and im glad that harry got to kick a little butt right at the end.

*claps* yay! You have a beautiful, newly completed story! There's a word besides "beautiful" that would work much better (beautiful just doesn't fit, it's not good enough), I'm sure there is but I just can't think of it at the moment.

No! He can't have failed! He's Harry bloody Potter!

And, by the way, I was eating Spagetti Bolognese when yoo said, 'You look constipated' . I mysteriously pushed my food away XD No idea why.

From Me x

could those two boys miss any more possible escape chances due to their procrastination. still they are becoming really quite sweet together.

Nice start. In chapter 1, though, you say it is Harry's 16th birthday. Now you say it is the middle of July. Harry's birthday is July 31.

Sweet Merlin! Only one more Chapter? Say it isn't so. Is this going to move into another story? Just so you know, I have my fingers crossed that it does. Once again...you rock! WooHoo! Action, suspence, danger, humor(“It’s…nothing!” Draco replied in between giggles, “it’s just you look really constipated when you’re doing that face), and best of all...Lucius on his arse! Wow! That's a Kodak moment, or in their case a good pensieve memory. It was very nice of you to give us greedy lot a chapter today. Most generous of you! Till I type at you again... thanks and on a personal note: YOU ARE TO KIND! Big Smile!

My heart was practily racing this chapter, I loved it.

Ib et I know where draco's going.

I LOVE THE STORY! Tsk, tsk, Harry really needs a better mask.

Cliffhangers? You do them so well! But, I don't think it's because you are evil or anything. I think it shows you are very smart! You leave a cliffhanger and then we absolutely have to keep reading to find out what's happens next. If anyone thinks you are evil...well then, I say if you are, you must be an evil genius! As Ron would say...BLOODY BRILLIANT MATE! Anywho... we like evil here, if you exclude Voldy and a few others. And given the right story, and no one screws with Draco and Harry's thing, we can maybe ...sometimes... like them too. Even Voldy. Don't nobody roll your eyes. There are to many Voldy stories out there for no one to like old Voldy shorts (There is some out there with him young again and all tall and dark and naked... or naked Lucius...) Well! Don't I get off topic! Great update by the way! I finally remembered what I'm really here for! Now that he seems to have the Down With Voldy and His Evil Group of Asskissers Society on his side...time to kick some Deatheater butt. Or at the very least, get in some good punches and spells, grab his new friends, grab his new sex toy...I mean Draco (gee, almost got sidetracked again) and get the hell out of there. Live to fight and kick Voldy straight to hell another day! Except Nicholas, leave that piece of crap to his fate. Big Wish: could you please please let Harry or Draco get a good lick in on Lucius maybe Bella. Be real nasty with it. Let all the evil out on them! Maybe you could invent some spell that sticks them (lucius and Bella) together in a compromising way. Maybe it's something Snape or the Maruders taught Harry and nobody can reverse it but Snape or Harry. And Snape don't have to be in no rush to fix it either. Nothing says he has to tell them he knows the cure! Anywho! Love it! Keep it coming! Hangs head...I'm sorry if I said or wrote to much. Let me know and I will keep it shorter.