Reviews for Twenty Unknown Secrets of Maito Gai |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely! I adore the way you portray Gai, not just here but in Neji‘s story as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. All three of this series is absolutely beautiful. Well, not Naruto's though. That's depressing as f. |
![]() ![]() this is amazing! one of the really few overpowering fics that really... wow! i iwhs i can write like that! i love the fact that you included naruto (mato gai and naruto centric relationships are SO RARE... well done!), lee!, tenten too omg she deserves more, and neji. loved the fact kakashi is in there too. bruh. i love this whole thing. maito gai... you are really smtg, huh? tq so much for potraying him the way i wish i could :") |
![]() ![]() tears. literally left me in tears |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You hit us with these mixed emotions and you keep hitting us the entire way through. |
![]() ![]() I love this! It's so unique and even if this isn't the cannon story it's a nice change |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was crazy and I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story even if some of the things in there are now not true. Still it was a wonderful story. Thanks for making it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this XD I was quite pleasantly surprised by the mention of the Ainu, and even though it didn't have much to do with Gai, I thought it was a nice touch. The whole deal with the Kyuubi's chakra affecting him was also pretty cool. I laughed out loud when you mentioned that Kakashi was the one who had to fight Gai, and I was more that a little surprised by all the parallels between him and Naruto. The part where he thought Naruto had style really got me XD I never did catch why his dad said he couldn't have kids though. Did the Kyuubi's chakra make him go sterile or something? Anyway, just wanted to say that I liked this. I'm not usually very good at leaving reviews, especially on oneshots, but this one deserved it :) |
![]() ![]() Cool... I almost forgot that he is Neji's jounin sensei. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is as good as her sister fic. I liked Gai's characterization, story and his unknown link with the Kyuubi. It's good to see that you manage to give so much depth to this character who is often underestimated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your version of Gai's father more than Kishi's, as well as the idea that he skipped Chunin. I'd love to read a fic detailing that exam! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. It's a great perspective on Guy. |