Reviews for Breaking Dawn
mintgil chapter 7 . 2/8/2012
you're story is absoulely AWESOME , please update soon! I am in love with this plot and story line please update soon .
twchick chapter 7 . 3/12/2011
AMAZING! please update soon!

xxx -Petra
noonetoyou33 chapter 7 . 7/6/2008
great writing! i'm really enjoying reading it. thanks.
Del3195 chapter 7 . 6/27/2008
Whens the next chapter gonna be up i love it and i think that its awesome! Stephenie Meyer is amazing and you gave a very good idea
iNdy MiLk chapter 7 . 5/22/2008
cool story, i liked how it seamed so real, what with the honeymoon and everything!

i hope you update soon
ToriVampire94 chapter 7 . 5/17/2008
nice! Will there be more?
Jessica chapter 7 . 5/4/2008
I love this! GOOD JOB! I love how u make their love so great )
Rosalie Hale Cullen chapter 7 . 4/27/2008
it's awesome! (well i'm not much of a critic and i like anything that has to do with edward and bella and the cullens! so, ya! i luv it!
J'adore Edward chapter 7 . 4/12/2008
Yay I love it except edward seems a bit more laid back than he is in the books and i think it's part of his charm how overprotective and well uptight he is. But I do love it update soon please
Mizra chapter 7 . 4/11/2008
I think this is an amazing little story. I've read through all seven chapters this morning and I really like it. I'd love to see more if you are through with college applications and such.

(Trust me, I understand the process. And graduating college can be much more difficult at times, too.)

I really like the fact that you let Bella be scared of oceanic creatures. Kinda puts her character a little more in there, I think. I also liked the fact that Alice snuck in a certain garment that turned Bella three shades of blush and Edward... well... excited, shall we say?

You very maturely wrote the love scenes, too, especially for a high-schooler. I appreciate that.

Nice work!
EdwardRoxMySox chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
I like it so far! Its going on my favorites rite now and I've only read the first chapter. Looking forward to the rest! Edward 4ever rox my sox!
Cinnamint Kitty chapter 7 . 3/30/2008
you ned to update! great story! I'm dying to read more!
Courtney Rose chapter 7 . 2/22/2008
Love it so far!

Keep updating please.

addicted-cullengrl chapter 7 . 2/16/2008
Who! Loove it...can't wait til chapter 8, if you want some critisism, just ask and i'll read it again and pay extra addention
cristina chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
this was a great story. really liked it but u left me hanging in chapter 7 i want more its like a drug lol. well i hope u get applied to the college u want.
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