|Reviews for Breaking Dawn|
| mintgil chapter 7 . 2/8/2012
you're story is absoulely AWESOME , please update soon! I am in love with this plot and story line please update soon .
| twchick chapter 7 . 3/12/2011
AMAZING! please update soon!
| noonetoyou33 chapter 7 . 7/6/2008
great writing! i'm really enjoying reading it. thanks.
| Del3195 chapter 7 . 6/27/2008
Whens the next chapter gonna be up i love it and i think that its awesome! Stephenie Meyer is amazing and you gave a very good idea
| iNdy MiLk chapter 7 . 5/22/2008
cool story, i liked how it seamed so real, what with the honeymoon and everything!
i hope you update soon
| ToriVampire94 chapter 7 . 5/17/2008
nice! Will there be more?
| Jessica chapter 7 . 5/4/2008
I love this! GOOD JOB! I love how u make their love so great )
| Rosalie Hale Cullen chapter 7 . 4/27/2008
it's awesome! (well i'm not much of a critic and i like anything that has to do with edward and bella and the cullens! so, ya! i luv it!
| J'adore Edward chapter 7 . 4/12/2008
Yay I love it except edward seems a bit more laid back than he is in the books and i think it's part of his charm how overprotective and well uptight he is. But I do love it update soon please
| Mizra chapter 7 . 4/11/2008
I think this is an amazing little story. I've read through all seven chapters this morning and I really like it. I'd love to see more if you are through with college applications and such.
(Trust me, I understand the process. And graduating college can be much more difficult at times, too.)
I really like the fact that you let Bella be scared of oceanic creatures. Kinda puts her character a little more in there, I think. I also liked the fact that Alice snuck in a certain garment that turned Bella three shades of blush and Edward... well... excited, shall we say?
You very maturely wrote the love scenes, too, especially for a high-schooler. I appreciate that.
| EdwardRoxMySox chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
I like it so far! Its going on my favorites rite now and I've only read the first chapter. Looking forward to the rest! Edward 4ever rox my sox!
| Cinnamint Kitty chapter 7 . 3/30/2008
you ned to update! great story! I'm dying to read more!
| Courtney Rose chapter 7 . 2/22/2008
Love it so far!
Keep updating please.
| addicted-cullengrl chapter 7 . 2/16/2008
Who! Loove it...can't wait til chapter 8, if you want some critisism, just ask and i'll read it again and pay extra addention
| cristina chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
this was a great story. really liked it but u left me hanging in chapter 7 i want more its like a drug lol. well i hope u get applied to the college u want.