Reviews for Look past it |
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![]() ![]() ![]() uh oh! :) magicalwiz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh that sneaky little Sirius. He's a trouble maker, that one. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this is really good, pleeaasse write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw poor Lily... |
![]() ![]() ![]() JAMES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Sirius's mad reasoning. The only things detracting from your story are grammar errors. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, cant wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute...poor poor Sirius. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haa, i love sirius. check out my story! tell me what you think about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I cant believe Sirius was so stupid... did he honestly think that Lily would marry James. Come ON, even Sirius isnt THAT stupid...or maybe he is... |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was so great but that was short could make it longer. and sirius a ses god was so funny hahahaha GOOD STORY |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha, cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHOA THERE SIRIUS...the words force, Lily, and James in the same sentance is never a good thing! Cant wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is pretty funny, I like it. |