|Reviews for Lost|
| shaw1243 chapter 5 . 2/5
I enjoyed this, the only problem I have is that given the fact that chopper is on the crew and Nami still had her regular Bo staff vivi should still be part of the crew. Other than that it was an enjoyable read
| reemoo chapter 3 . 12/19/2014
aww poor luffy .. and i think smoker is sweet a bit ..
yaaaay go and save your captain guys ! XD
| reemoo chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
WOW ! nice work :D i enjoyed reading this chapter and i'm so worried about luffy and FCS zoro nd nami :((
| Sailor Pandabear chapter 5 . 12/17/2014
| K.E.Alvarez chapter 5 . 10/27/2014
That was really good! With everything that happened in Alabasta and then Punk Hazard, I can imagine Smoker becoming sorta-friends with Luffy. I also loved the novelty on having a weakened Luffy that still 'overcomes' his foe. There's that quote that goes something like, you destroy an enemy when you make them your friend. Also, just curious, why not include Robin? Was it just a little AU, because it's obviously after Alabasta but you managed to slip in that bit about Luffy's grandpa. Anyway, thanks! I really enjoyed this!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
| Ubermarine chapter 5 . 7/7/2014
Not adding Vivi or Robin was a good idea.
| EspirituDelMar chapter 5 . 5/10/2014
Aww, so sweet! :) I‘ve always loved the friendly-but-not-exactly relationship between Luffy and Smokey, it‘s just so kawaii! ;)
| Yvonne Park chapter 5 . 4/8/2014
Good story! I really enjoyed reading it. It makes sense that Smoker would realize that Luffy is different than other pirates. Great job! :)
| Lokithenightfury chapter 5 . 4/1/2014
I really loved this story, it was so sweet! You're a fantastic writer, don't stop writing!
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 5 . 12/23/2013
This slight AU, right?
Luffy said he didn't hate Smoker as if he never said that before...
And Smoker act as if Luffy never save him before...
But whatever...! This is Great!
I wonder does Smoker know that Luffy's Gramps are Vice admiral and Hero of Marine?!
Luffy's Nakama obviously doesn't know yet...
I was close to panic when Smoker tried to hid Luffy from other Marine...!
I'm glad Luffy himself helped and so Smoker not in trouble because of him...! :)
Luffy having fever was rare...!
I'm glad i found and read this fic! ;)
| annea101 chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
where's either vivi or robin cuz there is no way for chopper to be there without either of them. cuz vivi was there when chopper was recruited and in the same day vivi left robin joined the crew so one or the other has to be there
| wolf of infinity chapter 5 . 11/1/2013
This fic was really enjoyable! I'm very happy that I came across it. Too often with these "character-gets-sick-fics", they're too rushed or half-assed, so I'm glad that good ones like this exists as well! I like the way you went a bit deeper into both Luffy's character and the effects the water has on devil fruit users. The story and the characters are believeable, and that's very important, especially when having the characters act out of character. Good job with that! :) I also like how dramatic, yet sweet this fic was. You took the time to go into detail both in the dramatic scenes and the fluffy moments, and it just made the story more wholesome and captivating!
Thanks for writing this and posting it for us to read! Keep up the great work! :)
| LunarStar98 chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
loved that story please make more like it! :D
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/19/2013
Smokey ain't so bad after all! lol