|Reviews for Lost|
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 5 . 12/23/2013
This slight AU, right?
Luffy said he didn't hate Smoker as if he never said that before...
And Smoker act as if Luffy never save him before...
But whatever...! This is Great!
I wonder does Smoker know that Luffy's Gramps are Vice admiral and Hero of Marine?!
Luffy's Nakama obviously doesn't know yet...
I was close to panic when Smoker tried to hid Luffy from other Marine...!
I'm glad Luffy himself helped and so Smoker not in trouble because of him...! :)
Luffy having fever was rare...!
I'm glad i found and read this fic! ;)
| annea101 chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
where's either vivi or robin cuz there is no way for chopper to be there without either of them. cuz vivi was there when chopper was recruited and in the same day vivi left robin joined the crew so one or the other has to be there
| wolf of infinity chapter 5 . 11/1/2013
This fic was really enjoyable! I'm very happy that I came across it. Too often with these "character-gets-sick-fics", they're too rushed or half-assed, so I'm glad that good ones like this exists as well! I like the way you went a bit deeper into both Luffy's character and the effects the water has on devil fruit users. The story and the characters are believeable, and that's very important, especially when having the characters act out of character. Good job with that! :) I also like how dramatic, yet sweet this fic was. You took the time to go into detail both in the dramatic scenes and the fluffy moments, and it just made the story more wholesome and captivating!
Thanks for writing this and posting it for us to read! Keep up the great work! :)
| LunarStar98 chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
loved that story please make more like it! :D
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/19/2013
Smokey ain't so bad after all! lol
| Lady Serena chapter 5 . 8/30/2013
Thank you so much for writing such a touching and poetic story. I love how gritty and raw it felt and that other side of Luffy that is not shown enough. One of my favorite Luffy-centric stories for sure. :)
| ghanathesaiyan4 chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
I like how this chapter was mainly focused on regrouping after the storm, you are a good at sensing the hidden side of Luffy like I am.
| cleonaya chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
That was so good I've been looking fit a story like this thanks for writing it the style was different, but I enjoyed it.
| LyricoJ chapter 5 . 6/17/2013
Hahaha. Smoker and luffy remind me of garp and gold roger ..kk, but i really like their rival relationship.. its so cute, sweet and fluffy..
| Minca chapter 5 . 4/1/2013
That was beautiful (: I think you kept the characters wonderfully in character.
| alynawatlovers chapter 5 . 3/15/2013
Ummmm... question! I've read through the story and it seems to be lacking a character. Since Chopper has clearly joined the crew, either Vivi or Robin would be accompanying them. Where are they?
| BiscuitCultist chapter 2 . 2/27/2013
"On that note, I'd like to say how incredibly rude it is when people either add a story to their favourites list, or add it to their alerts list and don't bother to review."
Personally, I find it much more rude to be one of the authors on this site that begs for reviews. Just the fact that they favorited or followed your story tells you they liked it. A review that only says good story is worthless, I only review when I have a criticism, comment or suggestion. Otherwise, why waste the time to type up a review that doesn't actually help make the story/author better?
| AkaSpada97 chapter 5 . 2/25/2013
Woah, I really liked this story! The dynamics between both Luffy and the crew as well as Smoker and Luffy were well done, as well as everyone else's interactions with each other, it all flowed together very well!
| SmittiMJC chapter 4 . 2/19/2013
I apologize for now reviewing any sooner then this. This story is absolutely gorgeous. The best Nakamaship story I have ever read. It is in character, smartly written, well paced and the plot itself is coming to an end very smoothly. I am in love with your ability to write for so many characters at once without having the readers transition of narration be noticeable. I the first chapter it flicked between Sanjis feeling of dread to a few of the other Strawhats without my noticing the change of viewpoint. An excellent read into Luffy's character as well as Smokers. More than anything I love that the relationship between them is all platonic, and yet closer than brothers.
| tsaurn chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
couple of inconsistencies noticed...Chopper's on the crew, so we must be on the Grand Line (i don't believe you've mentioned when your story takes place, before or after Alabasta?)...how is Nami navigating the Going Merry to an island without an eternal Log Pose? She said 'island near here'...so not the one that the Log Pose was sending them to. They're depending on finding an island by chance instead of just sailing out of the path of the waterspout? Also, we seem to be missing a crew member...If we have Chopper, we must have already taken Vivi on board. She should be here, unless this fic takes place AFTER Alabasta, in which case we should have Robin.
in a slightly unrelated note, i'm wondering how you manage to give Luffy a fever, since by his own admission he (Sanji and Usopp as well) has never been sick.