Reviews for To Create
Gamma Cavy chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
how long will it take for those two to realise they care about eachother
MoonlightTyger chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
I really like this fic; I can read it over and over again. I especially like the part right after the huge Heartless Angel attack, when Cloud and Sephiroth are conversing - Sephiroth seriously sounds like a dad explaining something to an impatient child (a very humorous idea, especially when that child is Cloud XD Not the first time they've played those roles, either XDD). Anyways, kudos on a great job; overall it's a thoroughly enjoyable piece! :D
Totally Renegade chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Okay, this one made me laugh my ass off. The imps were great and the lighter dynamic between Sephiroth and Cloud made the whole thing seem more adventurous, less emotionally heavy. Really, you're one of the few that has made my Favorite Author archive, considering you can write the whole spectrum fantastically. Keep it up. -Wolf
Artic Virus chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
OKay, so let me start by just thanking you for ALL of the Kingdom Hearts SephCloudZack stuff and the FFVII stuff too!

You're seriously like my favourite author on FF right now...

:D

I love the way you see Sephiroths personality, it fits the one I have in my head straight on! And of course I love Zack too...( he's my fave, after all ) and the whole FRIENDS PROTECT EACHOTHER stuff is so GGRREAT!

Makes me feel all warm inside! Ahh!

But yes, this was ANOTHER successful installation to your KH...thingy/story and I can't wait for more!

I really don't have anything to critisize...

Just keep it up!
Kazaam chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
I love this story!

And the Cloud & Seph banter is just so great! I laughed so many times. XD

And I love how Cloud's denying caring about Seph...even in his own thoughts, chalking it all up to Zack.

Oh boy...so many of the comments in here were just priceless. And you used "Let's mosey"!

If I could add this story to favorites, I totally would.

-Kazaam
Chibi Cheesecake chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
Ooh, I'm really glad you didn't give this one up! I loved all of Cloud's sarcasm, especially the bit about what the creatures eat when they aren't eating Cloud, lol. And the "let's mosey"! XD Man. That's such a wonderful bit in the game.

I really liked the create versus destroy stuff in this one, and the return of existentialist Sephiroth. LOL.

Anyway, awesome oneshot. It just had a nice feel to it, you know? XD It was really fun, in a way.
Jediempress chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
I truly love this whole series you've got going.