Reviews for What Time We Have Left
proud.to.be.a.twin98 chapter 7 . 8/4/2014
I laughed so hard! The last line is brilliant! Optimus and Elita to a T!
FIREstee chapter 2 . 7/27/2013
Omg omg omg I just ;_; THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL you have successfully made me a fan of optimus and elita! Love your ironhide and chromia too but the latter has more action *winkwink xD Looking foward to all your fics
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Zephyr chapter 17 . 6/9/2013
Holy scrap man, THIS IS GREAT! I'd like to se a sequel
scrin99 chapter 17 . 4/20/2013
Oh my gawd, that was amazing! Loved every bit of it! To the sequel!

Thanks for the Fic! :D
LucasVN chapter 17 . 1/2/2013
I assume this is where it all started. In that case, I must ask, did you ever see yourself taking this fan universe as far as you did?

Writing a sad story like this is not easy, but you managed it nicely. You also put the right amount of humor into it. Honestly, Ironhide and Chromia interfacing is easily the funniest thing I've read. And, while it was a shock at first, I think that the attack disrupting the party and cutting off aome of the goodbyes was a good touch. War is unpredictable. And, I like that brief glance at Skywarp and Thundercracker just before the attack. It reminds us that not every 'Con is as sparkless as one may believe...

While it doesn't quite fit any scene in the fic, I have to share this song, just because it fits the overall mood of the story and all of the couples in it: youtube watch?v 9MJHcDKHUbI

On to AWCT...
Love Is 4 Walls chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
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DitzyMusicLover chapter 17 . 7/16/2012
Oops, I put the Skywarp/Thundercracker comment in the wrong chapter. I should've done a better job at skimming. I also forgot to mention I can see using Goldbug as a different bot altogether, considering he looks way different than Bumblebee. Sucks he had to die though. Anyway...

I wish I had the talent of writing that you have. I wish I can write fight scenes this good. I have said it before, and I will say it again: You are an awesome writer. You suck us into the story with vivid imagery and intense emotions, and we (or at least I) don't want to leave.

Btw, how's it going with your other two side-stories?
DitzyMusicLover chapter 16 . 7/16/2012
YAY SKYWARP AND THUNDERCRACKER! *Glomps unsuspecting Seekers* Thanks for putting them in.

I've seen quite a few fics where Bee is Optimus's creation. This way, where coming from the spark is a theory and experimented is a lot more believable than having the Allspark and spark-merging both able to create.

Haha, going up against them without knowing those two are the most trigger-happy Autobots out there. He was fraggin lucky! But he didn't get the information on time. Well, that makes great drama.
DitzyMusicLover chapter 15 . 7/16/2012
Tee Hee, he rambles too much. I'm wondering if maybe he didn't know and was sent on that mission because Starscream might've suspected something. Then again come to think of it, if he did, Starscream wouldn't given Counterpunch the Antivirus. Sly thinking of double-crossing them. Never once did they suspect Counterpunch, but Starscream. Guess he needs to treat his underlings with more respect so they don't automatically assume him.

Can you say Surprise Party?

And when the mech first showed up behind Frenzy, I instantly knew it was Soundwave, before his designation was said. (Then again, that might be pretty predictable). Sucks that Barricade can't say goodbye.
DitzyMusicLover chapter 14 . 7/16/2012
I really wish when my computer says I am logged in that I really am logged in, because I'd rather review on the comp, not my phone.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/16/2012
I love reading fanfics on my phone, I hate reviewing on my phone.

I read the exchange between Sideswipe, Wheeljack and Sunstreaker to my husband and he laughed. (we were lounging, reading fanfics on our phones, me this one and him a Harry Potter one).

btw, you'll get a few reviews in a row, I also read the next five chapters on my phone also. I'm reviewing with my thoughts when I first read the chapters.
Farky-fark and the Munky Bunch chapter 17 . 4/26/2012
:( Sad chapter, but yay! I'm done with this one! :D So...since Prowl and Jazz are gonna finally be sparkmates when he gets back, do you find a way around the whole issue with Jazz being torn in two? I sincerely hope so. I understand every old story could use revisions, but I still enjoyed all 17 chapters. :) Great job as always!
Farky-fark and the Munky Bunch chapter 12 . 4/21/2012
Condoms! They're all condoms, right? Totally kidding. Anyway...I decided since I'm over halfway through this thread now, I might as well review. It's nice to get more of the intimate relationships between some of the couples, and just to learn new things about a few characters. I can tell that this was one of the earlier things you wrote, but it's still enjoyable, and enjoy is what I've been doing.
mamabot chapter 17 . 2/20/2012
wow, nice way of rounding everythig out and joining piece. Masterful work of blending, folding and combining. But then again, you also had an awesome team supporting and encouraging you. I can see how you and your support team (dear friends) share and have and awesome "universe" you have created for your characters.

I do love Flameware and Barricade.

Ultra Magunus: four thumbs up!

The cannon couples: perfect.
mamabot chapter 7 . 2/18/2012
ooooh, my sides hurt so bad. Oh, I forgot how to breathe. Thanks you so much for the Ultra Magnus moment. Oh, pain pills before I continue.
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