Reviews for Self Portrait
aie chapter 8 . 12/22/2010
Was quite becoming of the character! Arigato! liked it.
ShadowCub chapter 8 . 12/22/2010
Interesting, what's up with all of the angsty stuff lately everywhere?
AsukaTenjou chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
i love mai otome shizxnat, probably because we have a more mature natsuki and a very cunning shizuru good work and rushing to the next chappie!
Atra Ventus chapter 5 . 10/11/2009
This is by far my favorite short you've written. (ch 5)

The thought that Shizuru has in a sense BECOME Natsuki because Natsuki died is fascinating. I wouldn't be surprised if this would've been how she acted if Natsuki had died by herself during the carnival...sort of a living tribute to her by almost becoming aspects of her.

Spectacular story, amazing idea. I'd like to see it fleshed out in the future-a story like this deserves full exploration.
Harley Quinn Davidson chapter 7 . 9/10/2009
love what you do, can not wait for more
jquackers chapter 7 . 8/29/2009
Bitter. The title really fits.

Hope your friend feels better soon.
jquackers chapter 6 . 8/29/2009
I really like the last line.
Bleeding Hopes chapter 7 . 8/29/2009
Hope the gray sky in your friend's heart clears up soon.

Thanks for the update.
Midori-Sensei chapter 5 . 8/29/2009
Oh man that was good.

That was really frikin good...

Especially like the last sentence.

Really good, took a lot not to cry.

Ume sama chapter 7 . 8/29/2009
This is very emotional yet truly felt even on my end of loneliness. What a horrible thing to just be left. I hope things look up for your friend. Though, I have to say that if this happened, I believe it was meant to happen. Everything happens for a reason, even if it's unexplained.
Bleeding Hopes chapter 6 . 6/16/2009
Lovely update :D

nice, i loved it.
Ume sama chapter 6 . 6/12/2009
Deep words. The last chapter really got to me. Your words hit me hard, good job.
So true chapter 5 . 3/23/2009
Nice story... brings out some memories of my past, its very touching. I can understand the feelings of Shizuru. The words "The life I cannot live haunts me to this day. It haunts me forever in the shallow depths of my mind and heart. It haunts me, the life I should have had. My beautiful life with my soul mate, my lover." I am also half dead and have lived as such since she left me. Yes, I'm from Natsuki's POV as my Shizuru have left me. I have the same feeling as Shizuru in this story. My Shizuru is gone forever, dead to me in a sense, her love for me will never return. She always love me more than I love her...So much that I can say, I didn't cherish that love. With Natsuki's character I have, I don't know why she loves me so much in the first place. I ask her so many times, she just say I love you cuz you are cute and kind to me. Yes, a top student of our school, beautiful enough to swoon so many guys and girls, kind-hearted and so perfect in everything she do. Don't know why she likes me. I have quite a temper sometimes. She left after 7 years of being my lover and went pursue her dreams. That's when a person changed due to our society's reality and temptation. Its sad when Shizuru got Natsuki to trust her and love her so much ,then she left her. So, I'm stll waiting for a miricle to happen. But it seems, I can't get the guilt of betrayal off her now. I can't even tell her: "It's ok, I forgive you." Cuz she'll never believe me...
damn unique chapter 5 . 12/30/2008
"and she killed me again as her body fell limp in my arms" - so beautiful

favorite line...

love that we cannot have

is the one that lasts the longest,hurts the deepest and feels the strongest.
Bleeding Hopes chapter 5 . 12/30/2008
D': -sniff-

heart breaking. -blows nose-

-goes to read LFIYAU-
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