Reviews for Immergence
Lauren chapter 11 . 1/7/2010
OMG, I know you probably don't ever plan to finish it, but I wanted to tell you anyway its a solid premise. You have a couple errors here and there, "Adleast" should probably be, 'at least' and Considering, not consistering, or consisting.
Born to Fire chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
I think you should work on structuring your paragraphs and sentences better. The way its structured now keeps throwing me out of the story because I'm so focused on trying to figure out how it can be fixed. I hope that helps
Hazel Raven chapter 11 . 7/6/2008
I am tremendously excited that you came back to this story! It has been such a long time since I last read this story, so I think I may need to go back and refresh my memory. Thanks for coming back and writing more for this tale. I can't wait till the next installment.
Miravisu chapter 9 . 1/20/2008
Now pray tell.. who was that "you"?
Miravisu chapter 8 . 1/14/2008
*rubs hands and grins*

Takes a bit to bring Jake down on his knees.. so what has Sara been up to, eh?
Hazel Raven chapter 7 . 12/17/2007
It will be difficult to wait for your next installment. Great job!
Miravisu chapter 7 . 11/1/2007
hehe, their verbal battles can be very entertaining ;)

Now we surely must know what is going on!
Miravisu chapter 6 . 10/18/2007
That was really good, please let there be more chapters! I did notice some reoccuring spelling errors here and there, but seemingly mostly due to you writing as if possessed and on a writing spree :)
Ewa Snow chapter 5 . 9/11/2007
Curious vision at the ending there
Ewa Snow chapter 4 . 9/3/2007
Sweet! Irons is back!
Ewa Snow chapter 3 . 8/31/2007
Alright! Now that was a twist!
Ewa Snow chapter 2 . 8/29/2007
O, more intersting-ness!
Ewa Snow chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
whoa. creepy, but cool!