Reviews for The Poor of God
loveseverussnape chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
great chapter. can't wait for more. keep up the great work.
Sydney Alexis chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
Oh. God. That was so upsetting. It was so well written that I found myself close to tears in several places, but closing it with Luna being sent was the clincher.
sambee chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
I red guiltless this morning and loved it! This is amazing as a sequel and I can't wait to see what fate (coughyoucough) throw at them next.
Spots on a Pony chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
Good job, good story. I hope in one of the next chapters we will be seeing Vernon Dursley receiving the benefit of Dumbledore's attention. Though Vernon seems to have forgotten that Voldemort might not care that the Dursleys' treated Harry badly and still punish them merely for taking him in, even unwillingly. Vernon had better think long and hard before he 'drops Voldemort a line.'
Beth Weasley chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
Oh dear. Harry's going to be a great deal of trouble for the next forty-something hours, isn't he? I can already see that Sev is frazzled from having his heartstrings tugged so much, and it's only been a little while, not even a day yet. Looking forward to more!
CanonSnupin chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
Better than I expected, you have an interesting grip on Harrys subconscious
Anaelisa chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
Yes, a good choice is Luna, I love the character, she has a very interesting point of view. Update soon.
PuddleToes chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
I've enjoyed reading both of these stories, I'm eager to see where you're taking this sequel and I hope you manage to update soon! I can't help but be intrigued by the plot and I look forward to reading more, and hopefully soon :D Cheers!
LazLong chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
Impressive plotting of various story lines. You certainly have my interest, where all this is leading:)
the-dreamer4 chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
An interesting choice ... yes, Luna has her own view of reality. I wonder if she will have the ability to insert herself into Harry's ...

Very nice ... I usually feel uncomfortable with a story written in present tense like this, but since it's in third person, it instead just pulls me in as though I were in a pensieve ...

Good work ... eagerly awaiting more

dreamer
Tsuby73 chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
Thanks for the great story. I really like the way you developed the personality of the characters, and the way you describe Harry's dream shows really great insight. I read a lot of fanfiction, but I only ever like about 5% of them, because I often find that many good plots lack good charachter development (or the spelling is awful!) or viceversa, but your story is wonderfully well written and the plot and the character are both so well developed that I really had to add your story to my favorites. Please don't let us wait too long for a new update. Thanks for your efforts!

Tsuby
Count Napula chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
I adore Luna! I can't wait to see what she does...
corneroffandom chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
Yay. I love fics involving Snape and Luna so much lol X This one was... heart wrenching. Can't wait for the next chapter!
tag0 chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
And things get more and more interesting...
musehic chapter 5 . 8/31/2007
Wow. that chapter was really really great!

The dreaming part was not exactly how I thought it would be though... I thought that he would not be able to see Snape or that he would take him for his uncle and cannot come to reason...

But like you wrote it is even better than what I was expecting!

A great Bravo!
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