Reviews for People Lie
TheGreatNappa chapter 9 . 1/5/2008
Not here to critique your work, but I must say, so far an amazing story. You're very good in the way you write, and you make the characters extremely believable. I love it. It makes me sad that stories like this don't have the thousands of reviews it should have, when complete crap gets praised by the masses. Keep up the good work, my friend, and I will continue reading anything you release.
Scyth3 chapter 9 . 1/4/2008
Very very very impressive story you have here mate. Could not stop reading, from start to finish. Good job and do update soon.
Ikabi chapter 4 . 1/4/2008
I fell off my chair when I read who the third team member was going to be.
Lord of the Trees chapter 9 . 1/3/2008
Cool story. I'm seeing a strong influence from the film/novel Fight Club in this fic, especially in the earlier chapters (like when Hinata has to lose a fight). Can you just tell me if I'm right about this? I'm just curious that's all.
Langobalt chapter 9 . 1/3/2008
Interesting. Very interesting. Keep up the good work, hear? You're managing to give everyone their little spotlight time. :')
Oroburos69 chapter 9 . 1/3/2008
This is so wrong that it makes me very happy. I love the scene where Hanabi tells her sister that she is leaking. So lovely. And I really hope you can make them something like happy someday. And, you know, a Sasuke/Naruto/Hinata... well there just aren't enough of them out there! And if you want to add in Kakashi I certainly wouldn't argue!
apathetica chapter 9 . 1/3/2008
So... this sort of answered the question in my previous review. If i'm reading it properly, Hinata does have rage but knows she's not able to do anything about it and she's afraid of others.

I'm probably not reading things correctly, however. I'm really not good with telling when the characters are lying or telling the truth. That's what makes this story cool. I also very much appreciate the use of romance as a supplementary to the plot instead of elementary.

Will you update soon with another chapter?
apathetica chapter 8 . 1/3/2008
I can't decide if Naruto means it or not. Since this story is about lying, it makes me believe Naruto is just looking for another follower and not a friend. How much of Hina's rage was manipulation and how much was real? She seems very detached from her original goals - arg! I can't tell! Which means you're doing it right. Reading on...
apathetica chapter 7 . 1/3/2008
this is so awesome. There isn't really anything left for me to say. reading on...
Judah chapter 2 . 1/2/2008
This chapter is one of the best I've read in Naruto fanfiction, with the layered deception and simple friendship. This fic may eventually be destined for my favorites.
Marz1 chapter 2 . 1/2/2008
wow this story has like total sociopathic control issues going on. so far awesome.
apathetica chapter 2 . 1/2/2008
this. is effing. AWESOME.
Lady Silverhawk chapter 9 . 1/1/2008
Nice.
Lady Silverhawk chapter 8 . 1/1/2008
That was pretty much amazing. This chapter has a shitload of foreshadowing in it. HINATA KICKS ASS!
Lady Silverhawk chapter 5 . 1/1/2008
Naruto's an ass. But, I guess if he wasn't, this wouldn't be so absorbing...
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