|Reviews for People Lie|
| InARealPickle chapter 10 . 1/12/2008
Okay...this chapter took a serious turn for the weird.
And considering what the rest of the fic has been like up to this point... well...that's saying a hell of a lot!
Don't take that the wrong way. I love your fic. There's nothing else like it on
Anyways, I was a bit confused by the sudden scene change. At first I kept thinking, "WTF is going on?"
I soon picked up on what was happening though and I have to say I like how you handled the whole thing. It was all extremely confusing, but I get the feeling that it was your intent to leave us with a ton of interesting questions that will most likely be answered at a later date.
What I REALLY REALLY want to know is What in the heck happened to Kakashi? He wasn't mentioned except in passing and didn;t seem to be there during the whole ritual thing. He also wasn't there when Sasuke saved Naruto and Hinata by ::cough cough:: running all the way back to Konoha in the buff. _
So, is he dead? And if so, why don't his students seem to give a rats azz?
| swabloo chapter 10 . 1/12/2008
whoo, fabulous update, although incredibly vague and confusing - although, i suppose you planned that. It added to the incredible feeling to the chapter. I love it.
One thing is niggling me - what happened to Kakashi? I'm dying to kno!
| Lady Silverhawk chapter 10 . 1/12/2008
Lol. This chapter was, like, awesome. Defintely liking the interaction. I wonder what Kyuubi's planning...and what exactly Miko has to do with anything... Nice chapter!
| Akira Stridder chapter 10 . 1/12/2008
| DG Friendly chapter 10 . 1/12/2008
They survived against a Shoggoth?
They're tougher then I thought, we lost a great deal of agents against these things in Delta Green.
Surprised that they're not gibbering madmen thought.
| SoulShdw chapter 10 . 1/12/2008
Excellent addition. I think they way you shifted from Clients Lie was a bit abrupt but I understand your reasoning for doing so. In fact, I think it opens many new possibilities open for where you may take this story. Though I do hope you review what happened on the mission, which I believe you intend to do already. It seems to have brought the three together and I'm curious how Naruto's numerous plans will proceed from here. Good work.
| L'autre monde chapter 10 . 1/12/2008
...well. That was a big jump from what was last happening.
Did I miss something?
| abhishek20 chapter 8 . 1/12/2008
| peppymint chapter 9 . 1/11/2008
I love your story. It has its chilling parts, but I can't help but get sucked in. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Akira Stridder chapter 8 . 1/9/2008
ahh another follower
| Akira Stridder chapter 7 . 1/9/2008
| Akira Stridder chapter 6 . 1/9/2008
| Akira Stridder chapter 5 . 1/9/2008
what ..ahh Naruto dont shre Hinata!
| Akira Stridder chapter 4 . 1/9/2008
| Akira Stridder chapter 3 . 1/9/2008
ah make Hinata more powerful!