|Reviews for People Lie|
| Serendipity chapter 14 . 4/4/2013
Wait... do the Old Ones exist in Naruto? Cause that is simultaneously awesome and terrifying as a concept.
Anyway, Lovecraft. Good to see a classical literature reference. Just further proof that this story is clever.
| Serendipity chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
Hah! This chapter was actually funny! I was worried initially this was going to be all dark and serious (ie depressing for the most part) but if there's something like this every once in a while, no chance. A good balance, looks like.
| Dragonlord1199 chapter 34 . 4/3/2013
You should update sometime...unless your dead
| rezzkat chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
Oh wow. Ino being an annoying bitch. Big surprise ;)
I'm really enjoying the story so far, I'm just waiting to see what the MAIN plot point will be, maybe it's already been made obvious. Maybe this is just a story about what the affects of a cold, serious, unfriendly Naruto can be on others.
Oh well, I'll find out eventually :)
| Anonmyous999 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
I couldn't help the little 'daww' that snuck up on me when I read Ibiki's like a father figure.
| Stranger chapter 34 . 3/30/2013
And this seems unlikely to continue. That is truly sad.
| Razorsmile chapter 25 . 3/21/2013
quote"I knew there was a reason we oppress the branch house," she muttered./quote
quoteThe clone looked down at itself, looked at Sasuke and Hinata passed out on the ground, then looked at Naruto.
"Hah ha hah… no."
Then it dispelled./quote
The two funniest lines in the entire story. Hilarious, classic and legendary.
Tenzo's actions were perfectly logical, wholly justified and completely awesome. Nice touch with the vasoconstriction biofeedback jutsu; it is very important to keep showing Team Lie that they aren't worldbeaters yet, however badass they may currently be.
| warhammer651 chapter 34 . 3/21/2013
Damn shame this fic is dead. i rather enjoyed it.
Though just calling the thing a shoggath, without anyone actually telling them what it was called kind of took away from the horror a bit.
| Ermilus chapter 34 . 3/18/2013
The best story so far
| Sorrowful Stone chapter 9 . 3/17/2013
Fav's were 5 and 14. :)
| TheQuasiZillionaire chapter 34 . 3/17/2013
This is a great story so far. You are a wonderful writer. I just hope it gets finished. I hate to see such awesome plot line go to waste.
| Akiho Tonoshi chapter 33 . 3/4/2013
i think thats a lie!
this is an awesome fic, just plain amazing. the dark, twisted humor, the light happy moments, all blended together. i love it. i wish there was more, but seeing as its be, oh, about two and a half years, i guess i'm shit outa luck.
Hinata really isn't very human... naruto is like the only shred of humanity she has... at lest thats what i see.. she really did give up herself...
welll... i guess i'll make up and ending for myself, though i really hope you'll write it for me! :)
FINNISH YOUR STORY!
| titemb-bm chapter 34 . 2/22/2013
After 1 week i'm fnish to read your story ! it's just the beginning but it's great !
humour, action, love !
Naruto, sasuke and hinata my favorite people in the fanfiction and just perfect here !
i hope to read a next chapter !
| iamnuff chapter 34 . 2/14/2013
just reread this again.
oh god, why does it stop here?
| agnar chapter 3 . 1/6/2013
As soon as you had this naruto fall for Mizuki's line, I dropped this fic, because it lacked all plausibility.
I'm fairly sure earlier in this fic you had Naruto notice/recognize Mizuki disliked him. So what the fuck is this BS of having a Naruto who trusts *maybe* 5 people total, buying into Mizuki's really weak story?
It just reeks of lacking creativity on your part, that you used a canon scene/arc entirely despite it not fitting this Naruto you've created at ALL. It ruins the whole backstory you've set up, totally blown your smart, sneaky naruto plot piece.
For all your efforts at making your naruto deeper and stronger and smarter than canon, you might as well still be telling a story about a ramen slurping, loudmouth moron, because he's STILL a fucking idiot when it counts.