The first thing that popped into my head as I read "Very scary" was Columbine. Then, I realized the date (April 20th, 1999) and the idea was cemented. Especially at the "Colorado" and "boys with guns". AND THEN I READ "Columbine" AND WAS ALL LIKE, "I WAS RIGHT!" ... ... ... Right... ... *apologetic glance at everyone* Sorry. Ignore me. Sometimes, I have to say something, or it haunts me. This was one of those times.
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You can just ignore me. Sorry if I've brought up memories for anybody. (even though the story probably did that). *goes to cornerNox

One of the best American Dad fics I've seen.

I liked it.

Great story. Hayley's always been my favorite in American Dad (besides Stelio Kontos, that is). Thank you for putting some perspective into the father-daughter relationship. :)

5 yr old Hailey was so cute

so this is freaking amazing and I absolutely love it. Everyone was in character and the entire feel of the story is breathtaking.

That was amazing!

This story was amazingly touching. The way you incoporated historical events and politcal views while remaining reltaively unoffensive and unbiased was amazing. You're a great writer.

...Three words: FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC! I could totally see this happening (or segments like it happening) in an actual episode! :D

I like American Dad (better than Family Guy) but I've never liked Haley (at all :P) although this fic was pretty great. Everybody was in-character and the plot itself is enough to pique any Am Dad fan. People should write more fics on this category...

Well, again awesome fic. Really, I mean it. Look at my profile if possible! :)

Yours and Truly,

-Tearthgrrl

OMG FABULOUS and i dont say that lightly, I know im gonna read this over and over. Not only did you capture the characters persona's prefectly, u also added your own scenarios to the story of hayleys past, at the same time mixing events from actual episodes, u are a true american dad fan and an awesome fan fic writer

BEST AD FIC ON THE SITE

PLEASE WRITE MORE, OH MAYBE UR NEXT ONE COULD BE ABOUT ROGER LOLZ

a sad story. but worth it. well done.

So, that was what started the destruction of Hayley's relationship with Stan. What a sordid past they had. To think Hayley took it so hard on herself for the Camp Refoogee thing. I personally don't agree with Stan's beliefs myself. Yeah, I'm a left-wing, so what? Perhaps this may be a sign that Stan & Hayley's relationship, for the most part, is getting better. Sure there may still be some friction, considering the fact that they're on opposing wings, but still, yeah. Well, anyway, see ya.

interesting story. very interesting. I liked the ending. it was so like american dad. good work...is there gonna be another chapter?

you seen to be good at writing stan/haley centrics, please write some more of those

pretty good, ccan Roger appear in your next story.