Reviews for Bedtime Story
IAmWhoeverIWantToBe chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
*sniff sniff* beautiful. I love you for writing this.
Gratifications of a Liar chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
*sniffles* that was beutiful...
Malkavian-Acts chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
This was really good and sounds possible. It made me sad how you said Deidara forgot them but it does go by his art I suppose. Anyway, well done. Keep up the good work. :)
PeaceLiterature chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
woah... haha, i know what Taira means. i have an rpc (roleplay character) that has five split personalities. One is named Taira. XD. well, this story was sad... but awesome! i really liked the ending, i started knowing that Deidara was actually their brother when Rai walked out. but man, Miko-chan's completely oblivious... -_-. well, awesome work~
My-Sanity-Went-B00m chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
Oh my gosh, that was just...I'm crying! It was so sad!
Tilia Cordata chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
Hmm... I prefered the first story/chapter or whatever to stand alone, it was a good end. Deidara had forgotten them, after all, so this doesn't really fit. And in your first chapter Deidara was portrayed exactly as I had imagned. This kind of ruined it.

Anyway, you're a very skilled author... authoress? I am afraid that I am ridiculously picky when it comes to what I concider good fanfiction. But I still like your first chapter :)
Tilia Cordata chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
It was really beautiful, and the end - "a brother had forgotten her a long time ago" - was extremely fitting with my view of Deidara. Well done, this is going to my favourites.
Banana Ninja chapter 3 . 10/8/2007
This is really beautiful. The emotion, everything, it made me sad and wishing strongly for Deidara's freedom. I'm glad he got it in the end. :)
ElfArrow chapter 3 . 10/7/2007
*sniff*

again! managed to make me upset...

so good and well written, although this one does seem a bit disconnected from the other two...it doesn't quite follow on...

oh well, who cares? it was great anyway!

ElfArrow
Razzberryfig chapter 3 . 10/7/2007
I'm glad you added more to it! I think it all came out really good!
ElfArrow chapter 2 . 10/5/2007
*sob*

SO not crying...

another masterful chapter...more, more!
ElfArrow chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
you almost made me cry.

*sniff*

so well written...love it to death
Razzberryfig chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
Wow that was a really great story. Loads better than mine. I think ya gave me some insparation!
blowkiss chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
I became amased of this story. the emontion in the dstory, and the anger I felt was amasing. It was like I wanted to beat the crap of Iwa! I think it's because I hate shallow people, because that's the reason why my bigsister commited susicude, just because of her abnormal body-shape. she was bullied...

;_;
Raccoon Thief chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
sniff, sniff

this is really good. will deidara turn up in this story? will he kill them? update
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