Reviews for Gated
Katescats chapter 7 . 8/28/2007
Hi

I just read your story it was very good.
Nancy chapter 7 . 8/25/2007
I just found your story and have finished the entire story. It is a realistic account of how it likely would have been had it really happened. I can just see and hear MP talking to Jarod on her front porch. She voice would be rising and falling, just like you said. Then, she would become less angry, and the two of them could talk. I really enjoyed how you had everyone be together in the gated community,and then, as everyone grew up / older, they started having weddings. I was especially happy that you had J and MP marry and then have twins. "Happy ever after" can be a very theraputic and rewarding experience. Thanks for sharing this with us. Please continue writing and sharing with your audience here at Fan Fiction. Later,
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 7 . 8/25/2007
loved the MPJR ending.
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 2 . 8/25/2007
hm, interesting talk. but I think that Gemini knows too much about J&MP's childhood, things there is no way he could know since I doubt either of them would share them; while Debbie knows too little about what is going on, is completely clueless, even though she should've picked some things up over the years, she was quite intelligent after all.
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
I'm glad to finally see a fic with a romantic twist from you. great start.