|Reviews for From The Ashes|
| Scorpia11 chapter 1 . 6/20
Please come back! This is too good to end!
| Guest chapter 37 . 6/10
This is one of the best Dramoine stories I have read. It is amazing. I know it has been on hiatus for more than seven years, but I am still hoping it will be finished one day.
| moodygoody chapter 37 . 6/9
Good story, thanks
| cespericueta35 chapter 37 . 6/6
| Avril Keanan chapter 10 . 6/1
Hello- I'm loving your story- the one thing that grates a little is Dracos use of 'chit'. It makes him seem much older than he is and, considering he married Hermione, maybe criticizing her behaviour- "Malfoys do not answer doors- the impudence of her!" Might sound better than calling her a 'chit' -
an impudent or arrogant young woman.
"she is a mere chit of a girl"
Which in literature at least is used by older men towards younger women. It doesn't make him seem sly, or reclusive or whatever you are aiming for- just kind of jars. If he wants to be abusive 'bint' perhaps or 'slattern' but it doesn't feel like you want him to be abusive just dismissive and cold.
| Guest chapter 37 . 2/17
Gripping story, love the plot twists, you have a true talent for bringing the characters to life. That being said... please take what I am about to say in the best way possible... FINISH THE BLOODY DAMN STORY ALREADY! What kind of sadistic person drags you on a bloody 37 damn chapter saga.., and then leaves you Bloody f-ing flapping in the wind with no resolution ?! In the words of the great ruddy ginger... Are you Bleeding mental?! Hope you are doing well...
| TheseLittleWonders chapter 17 . 1/17
So many things to love about this chapter. Lol, I absolutely adored Draco's "pep talk" - it was so perfect; goodness, he's almost worse than Snape, isn't he?
I am really enjoying this story and really love your characterizations. They feel very canon, as are the hijinks in the Hogwarts setting. I especially love Draco - in general, but also in your story. I was surprised at his initial characterization, when he's shown to be the one to contract the marriage; he seemed very cold? and single-minded and logical in his pursuit of Hermione in improving his family's reputation. I also love the way he speaks, formalized, sarcastic, dry, witty, all of which you capture wonderfully.
Who doesn't love an action-packed Quidditch match? Enjoyed the excitement and I'm glad that Draco won. He always has a trick up his sleeve, what with a new, never-before-seen prototype. Too bad about the punishment, though.
| TheseLittleWonders chapter 1 . 1/17
I think this is the best setup for a marriage law fic (one of my favorite tropes) that I've read. Rather than having the impetus be a decline in population counts or some curse or even just to cause societal change, it is because of increased violence against purebloods and to prevent a civil war. I look forward to seeing our hero and heroine spit fire at each other.
| 1ntricate chapter 37 . 1/10
I can't believe this hasn't been updated in a long time... please do! This has been a fantastic story! :'(
| HPgal chapter 37 . 10/24/2017
Cant believe I got this far into the story without realising it hasn't been updated in so long! Hope it gets finished I need to know what happens! An epilogue would be fab seeing how all the 'arranged' marriages pan out in the future. Thanks for the brill story
| mrslara2112 chapter 37 . 6/10/2017
That was an awesome story. I just wish I had read the reviews and seen that it wasn't finished now I'm going to go cry.
| Guest chapter 37 . 4/15/2017
Can't wait for more
| KissMiInk chapter 37 . 4/2/2017
| StephanieTronco chapter 37 . 3/12/2017
Oh. My. God. Please, NO, please tha-that CANT be the last of it! Please update! Please *tears start to roll down face* PLEASE!
| Guest chapter 37 . 3/12/2017
Love love this story. I'm so sad it hasn't been completed.