Reviews for Truth and Lies
RoyalLovers1418 chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
It takes a real monster to sell their kids for money. Glad Miss Parker was there to help him through it
anamcharalove chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
I liked how Miss Parker and Jarod have found common ground between each other in this story. Usually they are always arguing, but in here Miss Parker comforts Jarod. Good job!
maggy chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Well, this is a dark twist indeed.

Very imaginative... and certainly within the realm of possibility.

[Avoiding spoilers ] Of course, if the characters you depict here *are* really so heartless, it puts a whole new spin on how one woman in particular continues to elude him every time he gets close.

Br. Cold.

Nevertheless, your interpretation is interesting and thought-provoking! Thank you for that.

One small (&, I hope, constructive) criticism: the dialogue at the end, for the most part sans descriptors, sets a fast pace that seems a little bit unsuited to the serious topic(s) under discussion. It seems to me it could be a more dramatic exchange if you slowed the rhythm just enough to create a bit more tension.

(Or not.)
Katescats chapter 1 . 8/28/2007

I just read your story it was good.