|Reviews for Truth and Lies|
| RoyalLovers1418 chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
It takes a real monster to sell their kids for money. Glad Miss Parker was there to help him through it
| anamcharalove chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
I liked how Miss Parker and Jarod have found common ground between each other in this story. Usually they are always arguing, but in here Miss Parker comforts Jarod. Good job!
| maggy chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Well, this is a dark twist indeed.
Very imaginative... and certainly within the realm of possibility.
[Avoiding spoilers ] Of course, if the characters you depict here *are* really so heartless, it puts a whole new spin on how one woman in particular continues to elude him every time he gets close.
Nevertheless, your interpretation is interesting and thought-provoking! Thank you for that.
One small (&, I hope, constructive) criticism: the dialogue at the end, for the most part sans descriptors, sets a fast pace that seems a little bit unsuited to the serious topic(s) under discussion. It seems to me it could be a more dramatic exchange if you slowed the rhythm just enough to create a bit more tension.
| Katescats chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
I just read your story it was good.