Reviews for Akuyou
Anonymous chapter 20 . 10/13/2015
No. Dan's not alive. DUH!
Anonymous chapter 15 . 10/13/2015
It that an ew or a yikes? *doges fire-burp* Ahh! Definitely, a yikes.
Anonymous chapter 12 . 10/13/2015
Umm, ghosts don't have to eat, sooooo...
Anonymous chapter 4 . 10/6/2015
You are making Jack too serious..
Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
Well, A cat's love is unconditional. *smiles at my cat*
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
I would support that law, for a while.
tanithlipsky chapter 23 . 5/30/2008
DanielScottFenton22 chapter 23 . 4/17/2008
Hey, loved "Akuyou" and I agree that if Danny has ice powers, Dan should have fire powers. I'm REALLY new to , and I really don't know how to do anything. Do you have any advice that you could give? I'd appriciate it.

I believe that Dan Phantom does have emotions, and I agree that he doesn't like showing them, but I would like SOMEONE to make a Fic in which Dan repents for what he did/ has a change of heart that is more than one chapter long.
goldacharmed chapter 23 . 2/27/2008
i liked the story but im just not a big fan of anything even a little out ooc. its not you thats just me. i didnt really like the fact that his family liked him. in the ultimate enamy they didnt love him they aimed guns at im even after fining out who he was. and jazz tried to kil him. so i dont really think it happend the way you made it. you made dan to b a bit of a wuss compaired to his real self. but other then that it was good .
Winnywriter chapter 23 . 9/13/2007
I agree with you when it comes to Phantom Planet. They worked out the whole DxS romance thing beautifully, but the entire plot seemed kinda...iffy.

I mean, for one thing, you don't see as much of his parents' reactions as I personnally would have liked, and also, Dan doesn't come back. I was hoping he would. I think that Dan is such a great villain; too great to ONLY have in one episode!

Maybe they couldn't get the voice actor to come back or something...

Anyway, this story was great. I hope there will be sequel!
nightlight6 chapter 22 . 9/12/2007
one word... AWESOME! :):)
Miko in training chapter 22 . 9/12/2007
shocker but aw.. thats so cute and weird at the same time i cant wait to read your next story have fun writing :)
Lil chap welsh nd proud chapter 22 . 9/12/2007
Winnywriter chapter 22 . 9/12/2007
NO! I don't want it to end!

But, OMG! I love the way it did!

It might seem OOC at first glance, but after you look back on everything that's happened throughout the story, you realize that it's the perfect way to bring it to a close!
Miko in training chapter 21 . 9/10/2007
wow its coming out nice i cant wait to read the last chapter.. it was a great story and i cant wait to read your next one :)
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