Reviews for New Beginnings, New Fate
Ficsion chapter 1 . 5/1/2019
one of the top ten stroies i have read and only one where i ended up liking oc more than naruto... please update
Kaiser Thanatos chapter 14 . 11/30/2018
This story is awesome hope you come back someday and finish it
Monster King chapter 14 . 11/17/2018
Great work
Stone Elbow chapter 14 . 4/7/2018
This fic is awesome! I almost cracked up in public... several times...
Hyourinmaru Kills chapter 14 . 1/16/2018
Issei Hyoudou1995 chapter 12 . 6/3/2017
This fanfiction is absolutely brilliant, it has very good plot, a clever idea for an OC and it is freakin hilarious with all the shit that Naruto and Jagaa cause on a regular basis.
Guest chapter 14 . 1/18/2017
Jagaa is awesome! So freaking awesome! And I love love love love love this story! Please don't stop writing it because then I'd have to track you down and kill you for it and that would be, in the words of a certain Nara, waaaaaaaay too troublesome!
Guest chapter 11 . 1/18/2017
The feels...
Titania Faith chapter 14 . 9/18/2016
This story has made me laugh more than any other Naruto story I've read yet AND it has good plot. Really good job. Even if you never post another chapter, this will remain one of my favorites. :)
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 6/20/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 6/19/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
vipekoi chapter 1 . 3/24/2016
i loved the way you introduced the oc character in this chapter, it felt natural and it had some flare, i think that was really good way to introduce a new character. :)
jackalope33 chapter 1 . 3/24/2016
nice original stories, though i wish you would update them... love the profile btw
StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 12/29/2015
The "I don't care if you all hate and despise me, I'm wiling to give my life if it'll get you to like me" attitude really bugged me in the anime, but you went and made it even worse in your fic. If you had made him resent the village a little for what it did, things would balance out. But you didn't do that, instead you made it seem like he could never do any wrong, like he is entirely unselfish and would forgive anybody regardless of what they did... He does not come off as a real person! There is nothing in his character to relate to!
HelpfulNudge chapter 14 . 7/19/2015
This story is hands-down my favorite story on this site... PLEASE come back to it. I'll beta for you, even help you write if you want... PM me if you read this bro, we miss you.
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