|Reviews for The Bet|
| inzane73 chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
I love that Dean lost, though at first you thought he won. I could completely visualize him forking over the 10 and saying 'Man' in that irritated, dammit-I'm-busted tone. Cute!
| ducky76 chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Hilarious... Dean should know better than to try to outwit Sammy! He can't even win a simple game of Rock, Paper, Scissors against him (he loves his scissors lol), so of course he'd fail while trying to cheat in their little bet. Loved it.
| bubblesquirt chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Ok first of all I'm so glad you've written again! *squeal* I'm such a girl! Haha.
This would be like stealing candy from a baby.
Or ten dollars from a little brother. "One week. You're on."
Dean snorted. "Yeah, with elderly people and dusty old books."
Behind his coffee, Sam looked guilty.
The thought unsettled him, made him seasick and competitive.
-Love your adjectives, as usual.
He stood up just as Claire was reaching for him. Her hand dropped, she looked up at him in confusion, and he cursed Sam for each of the fifty eight steps it took to reach the Impala.
And just as Dean's had, the phone in his hands went dark, then chimed a fresh and innocent welcome as it powered on.
-Again with the adjectives! You're amazing!
Sam blinked. “It was a setup?”
“Don’t take it too hard, Sammy. Lots of people are amazed by my cleverness.”
-Hahahaha! Too funny!
And she was gone in a breeze of flower-scented air, the cowbell echoing her departure.
But across the table, Dean had a long-legged blonde on his lap and they looked happy (see: drunk) but it was the familiarity of the scene that did, in fact, give Sam a warm fuzzy happy feeling.
God he was such a girl.
This whole thing was awesome! I'm so glad you wrote another story! I love these things that you do with Carikube. So fun.
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Very, very cute, Em. Good to see you here!
This is really a great idea for a bet for them and very well done. I can so see their faces!
Rub Lucky's tummy for me.
| Brigid Tanner chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Dean cheated! LOL! Of course he did...he's Dean! But then to find out he lost the bet first... I love the way you write the boys.
| DreamShadows chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Ha... Dean lost!
Very funny, and great fic...
| AbsolutAnda chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
HA! That was hilarious!
It made my day! When I read the summary, I just couldn't leave it alone. Great job!
| shmrck14 chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
So cute, and I could totally see a scenario like this playing out! Well done!
| K Hanna Korossy chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
That was really cute, just too...compressed. After detailing the first day or two, I kinda expected more upping the stakes and facing challenges over the week. Sam never even really had a Claire to contend with. But that's my one complaint, that it could have used more because it was a fun idea and so very like guys.
| E. Clay chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
LOL. Oh, I liked this. I liked how Dean played so dirty to win the bet but still ended up losing it anyway, and Sam reading Latin Porn was too damn funny. Good job on this. It was a lot of fun.
| Creedo chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
I just got into SN about a month ago, and I AM SO HOOKED, I can't stand it. This was a great short story, I loved it, it really show cased both of the boys characters and personalities well. Gave me a chuckle and had me rooting for Sammy...Great job!
| LovinJackson chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Loved that version as well :) i loved that whole thing and Dean losing in the end whie trying to set up Sam was priceless.
Plus i read ur storie in the brotherhood zine and really loved that too :)
| ephiny63 chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Hehehe I love it Sweetie when you and Carikube do your challenges, hm I loved it, especially Sam actually winning the bet like he did.
Well done again
| JHNNangel13 chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
Okay..loved it and thought it was hilarious. Loved the setup and the fact that Sam caught Dean losing the bet. I also had to comment on the fact that you used Kutztown as a place because my mom lives there so I live there half the time and I thought that was so cool that you used Kutztown. Great story and you definitely had me laughing out loud!
| DevilWearsJeans chapter 1 . 8/25/2007