Reviews for Part as Friends
SunRise19 chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Yeah, him saying that line about being friends..yep that did it..I wish I could find that audio! This was awesomely written!
AshleyInWriterland chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
I liked it :) The only thing is that sometimes it's a bit confusing who's PoV it's in at the current time, but other than that it was quite enjoyable.
rainbowfish22 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Great story. Again. :D.
TheSquintiestSquint chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
-Maybe she shouldn’t…

“I know it’s too late to make amends, but, Nessa, can’t we part as friends?”

Or maybe she should…-

Oh, go ahead Nessa. We won't blame you. ;)

Not up there among my favorites of yours, but still okay. I'm probably going to go to bed now. I'll come back and read the rest of these later.
Cole Alvina chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
I was just listening to We Deserve Each Other and the moment Nessa said "Remember who's your Madame Governor" I thought of this story. I hadn't read the story before, but I remembered the summary.

I love the lyrics to We Deserve Each Other, especially the parts you quoted here, but I perfer the version that got into the musical (and I also think Michelle Federer has a better voice XP)

I have to agree that this isn't the best you've done, but I do like this story.

My favorite part has to be:

“Lost your heart? Well, we’ll see about that.”

He swallowed. Her body turned away and then back towards him as her eyes widened. Her chin tucked towards her neck, she gave him a small half smile. Boq stepped back.

“Remember, who’s your Madame Governor.”
dresdendollontheprowl chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
You’re going to lose your heart to me I tell you. If I have to…I have to…Magic spell you!”

Maybe she shouldn’t…

“I know it’s too late to make amends, but, Nessa, can’t we part as friends?”

Or maybe she should…

I know that is not suppose to be funny, but I laughed...I'm sorry!

I loved these lyrics too. Very Good!
Zarrian chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Sf? Either way, great story!
Faba chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
?

I'm a bit confused.

What's S.F?

And does WWoftE mean 'Wicked Witch of the East'?

I never hear anything new...

I was pretty good, but maybe not your best work...no offense, just constructive critisim! :) Maybe you should...I don't know...sorry I can't be much help... :P
oboefae chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
What is this preview thing? Where would one find it? Nice job on the story.
Nor of Kiamo Ko chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Great story... but (I almost hate to ask it), what's SF?
Dyani chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
Oh, the angst! I love it so. You switch POVs quite a bit here, and it makes it a little hard to follow who's thinking what; it comes across as a bit disjointed. Well, that disjointedness actually fits the scene pretty well, but still, it is less confusing to stick to only one POV at once. And the SF tryouts are so fun to listen to. :B It's cool to hear how the show evolved so much over time.