Reviews for The Errant Soul
Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Nice story, I enjoyed reading.
:-)
Louey06 chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
lovely story
042014 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Don't hear too much about their realtionship, although it is obviuos that they love each other in the books. I think you captured their character pretty well!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
This is good stuff
Kaitlin Grace chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Beautiful story, I can imagine it clearly :)
ThatOneQuirkyFangirl chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
I loved it!
tinky punk chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
its amazing how bubbly and chirpy shopping girl like alice can be so romantic. to bella she's like" i'll give you a make over" or "i like this dress; jasper buy this for me" and when alone with jasper she's like"oh i love you jazz" and all cute and caring...

by the way your story was amazing... your other story with alice and jasper was so good as good as this one may be better than this one. you're a good writer...you should go on writing.

i like stories based on the book story...could you write some more alice and jasper stories for me...please..please.. i promise to read each of them and review them good...
Griffinesque chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Extremely well written. Alice and Jasper are so cute together.
Paula19 chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Yay for missing scenes - I love them!(especially when they include Alice and Jasper). Funniest line - "I must have missed the part where a vicious bloodthirsty newborn violently attacked your lips". Jasper really needs to share his insight (about having a soul) with Edward - it would do that boy some good! Alice and Jasper are just so right together - thank you for this lovely story.

Cheers, Paula
lola chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
really good
Soladara chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Nice sweet story. Good dialogue. Thanks for sharing.
Realynn8 chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
This was great! Beautifully written and very well captured. :)
Ras1 chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
This was very cute. I liked Alice kissing the stinging bites better.
Emilee21598 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
that was really, really, really, really, really, okay you get the point, good. good job.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
love it!
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