Reviews for The Fear
Random Fan chapter 8 . 9/23/2007
And so it comes to an end. I loved it, like the rest of your stories.
The Unkown One chapter 8 . 9/13/2007
And so the end has come it was great have a nice day.
Nintendogeek01 chapter 8 . 9/13/2007
Ah... a nice ending to the entire series... well, time to get on with my final review.

The action was intense, dramatic, with twists at nearly every point, but at time it was a bit too violent for my personal taste. Then there were the brief in between moments that had a moment of humor, but at times felt a bit blah...

My final rating: 8.5/10, This turned out to be a great story in spite of my not knowing anything about R-Type and Haruhi, thanks for writing this.
Nintendogeek01 chapter 7 . 9/12/2007
Wow... that was amazing... though initially it would seem anti-climactic, it wasn't like that at all. The smashers put up a long hard struggle and when all hope seems lost, an ally shows up and saves the day. Pretty nice way to wrap up this chapter.
The Unkown One chapter 7 . 9/12/2007
Great chapter have a nice day.
Kite Lanford chapter 7 . 9/12/2007
Ah... so it's almost over... sound short but good nevertheless...
Nintendogeek01 chapter 6 . 9/9/2007
The action was intense, and things are starting to look mildly grim, and while it looked as though the smashers had the edge, now the aliens seem to be having the edge. What a great chapter! Kudos! Bravo! Well done.
Shining Riku chapter 6 . 9/9/2007
Hey, Game2002! I hope you're doing good. I'm sorry i haven't reviewed lately, i've just not been in the mood.

I wanted to say, as usual, you're doing a great job! I really like this story, and i think it is very exciting. Please keep up the good work, ok? Good luck with College, and the next chapter too! See ya next time, and take care!

-Shining Riku-
Kite Lanford chapter 6 . 9/9/2007
I can't wait for the Climax scean... especially since you know someone has to step in...
Nintendogeek01 chapter 5 . 9/4/2007
Oh wow... those girls are now far more interesting than before. I would probably already know this if I knew what R-type was wouldn't I? Gah, dumb question I suppose I answered my own question.

Anyways, this was acutally a nice intervention chapter, it explained a few things, and it set up for the future nicely, all and all, I enjoyed this chapter.
Kite Lanford chapter 5 . 9/4/2007
I know there is plenty of species... however... I suppose they can't do much now, I mean, the first thing about Mecha battles, is that on-foot fighting is a definate bad idea (Unless you're Domon, Master Asia or Fei, but those 3 are a different story).

As for the slow reviews... that's beyond me as well.
Nintendogeek01 chapter 4 . 8/30/2007
Doberman? That's funny.

Eh... not the most action-packed chapter, but hey, it was still a good tough fight. Pretty good.
Nintendogeek01 chapter 3 . 8/28/2007
That was a pretty cool fight scene, although I must say...

yeuch... that was also rather grotesque, ugh... sorry, I can only imagine so much blood and guts coming from freaky alien things at a time. Oh well, still nicely done.
Kite Lanford chapter 2 . 8/26/2007
Oh boy... this is not good at all... I can't wait to see things move again, but yea, I wonder what models they would use to fight these Bydo...
Nintendogeek01 chapter 2 . 8/26/2007
Ugh... I'm not an R-Type fan, but in either case this was a cool chapter. I liked how casual it was at the time, and then monsters appear and who's there to stop them? The smashers of course. And nice cliffhanger, well done.
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