Reviews for The Dancing Cherry Blossom
ChinkyBella chapter 9 . 5/13/2012
Even with the errors , I love this story. :D
Dammit Jane chapter 2 . 2/4/2012
Hey. This story looked really good, and I was looking foward to reading it, but you MUST proof read. You are missing SO many words that understanding it is VERY difficult. It has potential, but I won't read the rest because of how little sense it makes.
n chapter 2 . 4/22/2011
seriously, ur grammar n english usage needs much more practise.
nikki chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
I like where this is

Going but you might want to go back and finsh most of ur sentces. I'm sorry if I sound rude but you stoped writting half way through a sentnce.
hatergirl chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
man i don't andrestand anyting you're maiking so many misteiks that is anoying to read it
aero13 chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
Plot is fine. But, I read through it, and words were missing. I could find what you wanted there, but it would be neater if they were there.
Writing Keeper chapter 2 . 1/1/2010
You have some missing words... is there something wrong with your computer?
RavenUchiha chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
You have a good story base. Though I have noticed that you left a LOT of unfinished sentences and mispelled words. Try to ask a friend or someone to proof read your story so that won't happen again.
obsessed-kunai chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
very good plot but you might want to reread it , some parts didnt make sense
tigers16 chapter 2 . 5/10/2009
either your english is terrible or you mean to do that but if you are then please stop!
Littlecupoframen chapter 5 . 3/15/2009
this is a very good story.

here are some more japanese foods for reference

- tempura


-dango (sweet dumplings, Itachi's favorite)

- Sake (japanese beer)

-Chirashi ( I think its a rice bowl with veggies and meat..or a kind of soup?)

-Onigiri (rice balls, often filled with fish or meats)
KaiKi09 chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
i was wondering are you purposly leaving words out because it is a bit confusing for me
Emilx311 chapter 9 . 11/19/2008
awesome story:)
Narutolover chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
love it, just like sasuke may be
Jeane Swift chapter 9 . 8/9/2008
i love this story i love how deidara is a flirt
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