Reviews for No Pain
FearOfDeathIsIllogical chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
A great story. Very well written.
Sarcastic Strawberry chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
whoa

that was really good

i didnt think i would cry

but i did :)

this was such a great story, you captured all the emotions he would have felt

really great job

-Strawberry
SisterCat144 chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
this was really good!

i liked how u put the memory of pony and johnny with dally playin football or sitting on the curb.

)
Maddie and Lorna chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
Oh. I cried. Hell, I cried. Oh. I can even type. You captured such emotions that I felt them. Oh Dallas...
N.E.P.tunes.out chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
That was really good. I'm trying hard not to cry. Tears are welling up in my eyes. yay for you!
MoonGlare89 chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
Wow. That was deep. It was really sad, but it was still good. Great story.
MookyLife chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
Almost made me cry...but not quite...after a while you can't anymore... great story! Dallas is my fav carictor(sp?)...
leahmarie 023 chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
wow that was really good. and yes my eyes started to get teary ]
Miriamimus chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
Oh gawd.

We did this in First Year as our novel. I don't remember much of it, but I remember Dally. My English teacher started crying as she read it, my friend Seb had to finish reading. Everyone had tears in their eyes, especially me, even though I had read ahead to that point the night before. And I still feel tears in my eyes when I think of how desperate, how unloved he must feel to want to die when Johnny was gone.

You do a really good portrayal of it. Well done!
T.J.Grei chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
you trying to make me cry? Well, it worked! That was a great story.
My-Arabian-Knight chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Poor Dally.

Stupid Dally

Poor Stupid Dally