Reviews for Locked Away
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
262 I wish to hug you
Kitten630 chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Aw! I feel so sorry for poor Ace. I mean, I've watched the episode like, six times, so I know that he was locked in the basement when friends or crazy girbles who think that the hamsters that want to control the universe came round, but I didn't think it was that awful. I once got stuck in an elevator for about three hours, but I had light and some one to talk to. But by yourself in the dark? (shudders)
DeviousAlias chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
I've been hoping someone would write something like this. Glad it was you.

Honestly, I can't even imagine how much it must hurt to be called a 'failed experiment', like a parent calling their child worthless I think.

Must be tough to be the odd ball out, the only good experiment amongst hundreds of evil ones. Reminds me of a different character I like.

I think you did a good job in capturing the emotions here. The last line somehow pulls a few heartstrings, even made me shiver as I imagined being stuck a small, cold and dark closet.

Definitly a good contribution to this fandom.

-The Deviant.
samus18 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Poor 262! All he wants is Jumba's approval. T_T
kinger810 chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
This was good... But the ending could have been better, jsut seemed like it was unfinished.
Stitchar chapter 1 . 8/26/2007

th-that's sad! oh i feel so bad for Ace!

Jumba is a bad guy.