|Reviews for Stagnation|
| OogaBooga1234 chapter 2 . 4/20
Well... This hit right in the feels and destroyed them. I was expecting an almost sweet little story with lots of reflection and character development, showing how cloud/zack had grown up and figured out how to not feel so guilty... Instead- THIS! I got this beauty of a short story that is written so well it gets right in your heart and stays there. I must say I am impressed with your style of writing :D
| anna chapter 2 . 1/6/2008
i sure want more ;_;
| kirallie chapter 2 . 10/1/2007
How horrible! How could you do that to Cloud? Was he still barely alive when Zack got him out of the tank or was that wishful thinking? Was he ever aware of the fact that his best friend had left him to die?
| Sabith chapter 2 . 9/23/2007
that was really good and as much as i like this story i think you should end it there.
| Miss Murderess chapter 2 . 9/22/2007
That was cute, poor Cloud, Zack really needs to be more observant... I hope to see more of this story in the future. Great Job.
| reno'sgf chapter 2 . 9/22/2007
this has got to be some of the best writing i've seen! this is positivley marvelous! yes i do want more!
| Calm77 chapter 2 . 9/22/2007
Oh more please, this one's so interesting!
| Von chapter 2 . 9/22/2007
Zack's gone and burried Cloud and then walked away? Of course I want more! :D Cloud waking up in that shallow grave would be pretty sweet..
Very sad chapter. Took me a little while to remember what was happening, but very good.
| Von chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Poor Cloud.. I wonder if he rememberes Zack leaving him. Hell, assuming he has any form of sentience left..
| angel chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
wow this is really good hope u continue
| Sabith chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
that was really really cute, i absolutly loved it! the fact that it was zack was really unexpected, excelent writing. id live to read more stories like this from you.