And here I go *clears throat* SPANISH CORRECTIONS! HikaruWinter version.
(1) No solo fue porque me han cabreado, Mom. ¿Podemos hablar en privado, por favor?
(2) ¿Qué pasó, luz? (Impeccable. I actually shed tears. You know how much botched spanish I've read before *breaks down crying*)
(3) Más de lo que puedo y sin duda más de lo que sé. Algo muy extraño... Mama, por favor, ¿podemos hablarlo en privado? ('Podo' is actually portuguesse... or galician. Wichever you prefer. It has the same meaning, so meh. Though for 'me', not 'we' as I think you intended...)
Yay for being a native speaker *cheers*
And yay for awesome fanfiction *double cheers*

awesome

Yeah - I'm out. Just can't stomach the direction your story is headed in.

I've never encountered anyone as fucking stupid as you wrote Hermione here. Her sheer stupidity makes my jaw hurt from trying to read through this chapter.

I added up the victims, and I mathed 78.5 years. Yeah, Professor Peacock deserved that.

Also, at chapter 6, when I saw mention of the Bat-Bogey Hex, I remembered that a fanfiction writer named S'TarKan gave the hex an incantation: Mucosa Volatis. It has remained in my head, and I wanted to toss it to you to see what you thought of it. Also, the guy made a really Harry Potter Peggy Sue fanfic, you should read it.

I really like the name that you gave the basilisk. I kinda feel sorry for her.

With all that said, I look forward to future writings.

A very innovative series combining Harry's unique upbringing and his use of intelligence instead of the jumping off a dark cliff onto jagged rocks without forethought senario!

The story is great, as always.
I Anticipate the next being as great as it's others.

Very good how Harry handled Dobby! Well done.

:D

still loving the series xD

though it makes it far too easy to procrastinate cause i just want to see what happens next! xD

harry potter with a flame red temper ;-) lovely

I love how you framed the whole Dobby conversation. And that particular game, "Cold and Hot" was one of my favorites as a kid! Imma keep on readin' now cuz this story is AWESOME!

Keep up the good work

This is such a wonderful story. My only problem is that I have no clue what Harry is saying in German that only Maganagall seems to know, yes I get that he is cursing but I have really no interest in looking through the net when reading this wonderful series for some German or Spanish when Harry or his mom decide to change from English. Again this is a wonderful story

With every story I like your Harry more. I wonder just what happened to Lucius?

lmao but pumpkin juice is orange lol

I like it.