|Reviews for Walking The Edge Of The Razor Blade|
| Ludi chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
I'm glad to see the beginning of the in-between stages of the Bronx incident and Betts' 'therapy' with Rebecca. I like the way you describe the natural progression of Betts' feelings, although I have to say that the best part of the story was the terror that races through her when she hears a movement at the infirmary door. Very poignant.
One little suggestion I would like to make though. I think her reaction to going to see a therapist would be stronger. I've been in the same situation myself, and resisted with every bone in my body until i realized it was a good thing, because it seemed to be an admission of weakness. But anyhoo, I guess everyone has their own personal reactions
*shrugs then slinks off*
| Pip's Sister chapter 1 . 8/13/2001
Hey, Phil. I know I reviewed this fic before on the XMB, but I decided I'd do it again. _ Great story! Betsy's feelings of the rape and Warren's desire to help her are very real and touching. All that research you did really payed off. I can't wait for the companion piece!
| jen chapter 1 . 8/11/2001
Wow, that was so good. Nice job.