Reviews for Uyoku Myou
TooLazytologin chapter 17 . 4/11
Bringing in an OC like this suddenly and then really turning Naruto back into Cannon was a bad move. My rec to anyone reading is to skip Part 2 as it seems to be just a crack filler. Splitting Naruto into two people and then leaving the main one weaker was bad move. That and the whole tattoo thing just seems to have taken a back seat and only pops up when convenient. And like we all don't know the "one" is Hinata. To sum this up, Kagami is what Naruto should have been when coming back, Hinata is going to get a power literally handed to her that is just as if not more powerful than Karama, and Naruto is back to being his idiot self, who can't focus on training because he apparently has to "focus on keeping his happy Facade up." While Kagami improves twice as fast because he doesn't have to.
Jay chapter 17 . 4/11
It was going great... Until this chapter. You suddenly reset Naruto to Cannon and took away the thing that made it different and gave it to an OC. Why, why would you go and completely screw it up. You took all the progress he would have made and turned him back into a dense idiot. I'm done, just done.
some random guy chapter 12 . 10/23/2014
Name: Kyubi no kitsune
Occupation(s): Deamon Fox, strongest Biju
Threat level: SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Favorite food: Humans
Hobbies: murder, killing, maiming, obliterateing, leveling mountains, flattening ninja villages, bargaining, interior design.
Lerris chapter 38 . 1/7/2014
Overall this was good,with the last half the better part...
Lerris chapter 28 . 1/6/2014
The only bit that really stands out recently is the strange idea that he can never be made a chunin, since he couldn't be allowed in the exams... Beyond that this is coming along well..
Lerris chapter 14 . 1/5/2014
Perhaps this could be updated to stress urgency. Hinata was dying...
Lerris chapter 10 . 1/5/2014
I like the originality here even though I don't buy the ruling since it was after the fight had been called and he prevented a murder. I'd expect Hiashi to punish Negi gravely but it probably won't happen... Ah well... Still this may make for a different third round which is good...
Lerris chapter 9 . 1/5/2014
The writing looks solid, but there is a lot of canon material that probably doesn't help much... Still the idea of an angel to counter a devil is an interesting one...
RaidenUzumaki14 chapter 6 . 12/15/2013
i am loving this. i do think its funny that alot of naruhina stories use kiba and the inuzuka clan and hiashi being an out of character ass for their stories. im interested to see how you use him. after all he was never man to naruto at all in the manga.
ninja 05 chapter 16 . 12/13/2013
Man I just finished chapter 13 and it thing like these that make me glade to be a naruto fan keep up the great work :)
Whybroski chapter 17 . 2/7/2013
I don't get kagami
DASvicks63 chapter 14 . 2/7/2013
Its amazing how you can cover so much in one chapter
Futago-za07 chapter 38 . 1/28/2013
Holy shit that was such a good story i didn't even want it to end ;(
Matsu chapter 18 . 1/4/2013
no not rip Kiba's nuts off just have him suffer just one ...ONE of Tsunade's power kicks to the nuts lol
Matsu chapter 7 . 1/4/2013
A Kiba beating? no no no...A Kiba in critical care and in a coma sounds soooo much better. *hands all sorts of dangerous weapons to Naruto to "help" Kiba on his way*
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