|Reviews for The Mourner|
| brenda-wood-sheil chapter 3 . 10/8/2007
I think our snape just fell in love
good luck draco
I think this baby is now sev's
| whitehound chapter 2 . 10/1/2007
Sad for both of them.
| duj chapter 2 . 10/1/2007
Do the boys play any further part in the story? I recognise the names from Silas Marner, but I assume you don't plan for them to play similar parts here as it is Snape who fits the title character's arc, not the eponymous boy.
| ellennar chapter 2 . 9/30/2007
Beautifully done, please do continue!
| brenda-wood-sheil chapter 2 . 9/30/2007
bloody brilliant I say
bring on chapter 3
I just wish I could take severus in my arms but I dare suspect I would be hexed before I could so much as begin the gesture
| excessivelyperky chapter 2 . 9/30/2007
I liked the bit with adding someone called Eliot. Cute, that.
And both Harry and Snape are such walking cases of PTSD it isn't funny. Of the two, I don't know who will have it hardest-Harry, who will be expected to be the Poster Boy Hero, and likely have his breakdowns in public, or Snape, who is dying by inches in his solitude.
Very good chapter.
| Blackpenny chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
Very interesting! I hope you update soon.
| brenda-wood-sheil chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
very good start
I look forward to more
| CoyoteWolf chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Oh wow. A powerful sadness now lingers on my mind. I wonder what Severus will do. And I do like his last reply to Minerva.
| wynnleaf chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
A good beginning. I'm very interested to see where you go with this and how you will write Snape, without Dumbledore.
| whitehound chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Well, as far as Severus's experience of fathers goes I suppose Albus *was* like a father to him - harsh, dismissive, unyielding... :(
| ESP chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
good intro. believable.
| Coral Grace chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Very well written. Looking forward to more. I hope you keep Snape as in character as he was in this chapter. Often stories with a child involved bring Snape a little too out of character, but I have positive expectations for this story.
| Ayashi1 chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
This is how I imagined how it'd have been, had Snape lived. Excellent writing, and I'm curious as to this child mentioned in the summary yet to make his/her appearance D
| Bravie chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Wow, that was wonderfully written. You brought me to tears reading that.
Please please write more an update soon.
I can't wait to find out what Snape chooses to do next. As for being headmaster, I'm sure someone can convince him right, afterall school won't start again for another 3 months. ;)
Or if he does disappear for awhile, maybe someone will bump into him 19 years later. I hope he gets to meet Albus Potter.
I'm excited to see where you will take this. Thank you so much for sharing your writing and please update again soon. Thanks.