Reviews for The Roll of Two
Guest chapter 2 . 7/14/2013
If you ever decide to continue this story I would like to know will you be following the manga or anime storyline? Because in the manga it is stated that because Snow and Koyuki are so similar to each other they are connected which Diana uses to to open an hole to connect the worlds. While in the anime Snow is more or less an clone of Koyuki created by Orb and Diana to create an person who should not exist in MÃR Heaven to use the connection between them to open an portal between the worlds. Same role and purpose in the evil plot but vastly different origins
Skyzerk chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
bwahahahahahaha funny how a simple change in the story can make it hilarious
Kristy Lansdown chapter 2 . 3/8/2008
It was great, I liked the part were Koyuki gets jelous of Dorothy. I can't wait to find out what Koyukis' reaction is when they meet Princess Snow.
Artificial Life Creator chapter 2 . 1/31/2008
i think some things should drastically change because koyuki shouldn't just be a random thing flitting in and out, if you know what i mean. she should act idependantly to the lines that you're going to change
Artificial Life Creator chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
i nose! It's so cool!
SonOfTheSky chapter 2 . 11/22/2007
Nice Job! This is really good! :) I'm looking forward to this!
Vanished Hatred chapter 2 . 10/17/2007
Aw, dang it! You beat me to it! I thought I was the only one with that idea! Chapters are a bit short, and the dialogue sticks a bit too closely to the manga, but you'd pretty much have to rewrite the story from the ground up, so I don't blame you for either one of those. In response to the author's note late in the chapter, it's a sort of slash between a cave and a temple. Let's just go with cave. It seems more... cave-ey to me.

Hope you update soon.
ChibiStellaChan chapter 2 . 9/24/2007
Nick-kun chapter 2 . 8/29/2007
Arg, school sucks doesn't it? Just don't get gun-ho with any extracurricular activites so all of us can read your story _
Nick-kun chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
UPDATE SON! I wanna know what happens _
ChildInMe chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
update soon!
AngelRin89 chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
wow...koyuki and snow are gonna be like O.O