So.
Good.
My goodness, well done! :3

beautiful.

I just read your story tonight and I thought it was wonderful!

Your writing style is great and it was like reading a novel! It was just a story that takes one away from their troubles for the moment and was a wonderful read. I for one have always thought Jareth/Sarah belonged together! Thanks for your wonderful version of that!

What a story! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I just wanted Sarah to finally say that she loved him! I had tears in my eyes while reading the final chapter. Well written and a hearty bravo!

:O :O :O AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME!

do you know wat is funny i can actuly imagine this as a film :L:L

nywho tht was FAB! i love it and i think you should thnk MyraValhallah for suggesting this hell i thnk her this was an awsome read i could barely pull myself away it was AWSOME! well tbh there ent a word for it it is tht good !

keep up the great work !

Chow!

defo goin on my fave list :P

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That was amazing! I stayed up until 2 am just to finish! Constructively, remember to proofread. There are sentences where you leave out a word or add one in, and it's confusing. But all in all, one of my favorites!

Excelent story line, wonderfully written, classical ending, haven't found a more romantically adventurous story yet, high praise! Hopefully we'll be seeing more of these? Yes? Keep up the good work!~DFP

awesome fic

you had a few spelling & grammar errors

but you did a brillant job on this

God bless and keep writing

AWSOME STORY!

I just love this chapter! great work!

Aw... it was so sweet! How charming.

The minute I saw the name "Mountain King" I knew there would be a "hall" in there somewhere. That was one of my favorite songs when I learned how to play it.

Ack! Amazing, brilliant, excellent! Gosh, I don't know if it's just the hour (it's 3am in my part of the world), but I'm so moved. I've only just stumbled into this area of the site and I couldn't stop reading your story. I told myself, okay, I'll stop at chapter 10 then continue in the morning. But I really just couldn't stop reading.

The pain, physical and otherwise, was clenching up my insides. You've got a great climax. And I'm glad you put in portions of Emrys and Morgan's battle. Couldn't help but think Megrim died a little to quick, though... I tried to listen to the song by Annie Lennox but I ended up getting a little distracted. He-he.

It was great of you to give a little backgrounder to the secondary characters. Of course, it was your purpose. All I wanna say is that is was very effective in making me feel a little sadness at Emrys' passing. (Nice names, by the way.)

Short and quick, which I appreciate right now because I want to sleep and if it had been any longer, I wouldn't have been able to close my eyes! But I'm certain that if one day you decided to return and make it a little longer, this would be even more excellent than it already is. I wouldn't mind to read that version either!

Don't stop writing. ;] Fanfic or otherwise, of course. And take care always.

They amuse me with their bickering.

I feel so bad for Sarah.

Nice chapter.