|Reviews for Without Your Heartbeat|
| Guest chapter 24 . 8/26/2015
My goodness, well done! :3
| writertron chapter 24 . 9/27/2010
| Brette96 chapter 24 . 4/6/2010
I just read your story tonight and I thought it was wonderful!
Your writing style is great and it was like reading a novel! It was just a story that takes one away from their troubles for the moment and was a wonderful read. I for one have always thought Jareth/Sarah belonged together! Thanks for your wonderful version of that!
| Morgan la Fae chapter 24 . 12/2/2009
What a story! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I just wanted Sarah to finally say that she loved him! I had tears in my eyes while reading the final chapter. Well written and a hearty bravo!
| tichtich2 chapter 24 . 10/6/2009
:O :O :O AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME!
do you know wat is funny i can actuly imagine this as a film :L:L
nywho tht was FAB! i love it and i think you should thnk MyraValhallah for suggesting this hell i thnk her this was an awsome read i could barely pull myself away it was AWSOME! well tbh there ent a word for it it is tht good !
keep up the great work !
defo goin on my fave list :P
| NeedingAnOubliette chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
That was amazing! I stayed up until 2 am just to finish! Constructively, remember to proofread. There are sentences where you leave out a word or add one in, and it's confusing. But all in all, one of my favorites!
| DarkFoxPriestess chapter 24 . 7/3/2008
Excelent story line, wonderfully written, classical ending, haven't found a more romantically adventurous story yet, high praise! Hopefully we'll be seeing more of these? Yes? Keep up the good work!~DFP
| Galandria the Vampire Queen chapter 24 . 3/31/2008
you had a few spelling & grammar errors
but you did a brillant job on this
God bless and keep writing
| babe-with-the-power chapter 12 . 3/28/2008
| sakura-light-angel chapter 8 . 12/23/2007
I just love this chapter! great work!
| Nanenna chapter 24 . 12/23/2007
Aw... it was so sweet! How charming.
The minute I saw the name "Mountain King" I knew there would be a "hall" in there somewhere. That was one of my favorite songs when I learned how to play it.
| danderfluff chapter 24 . 11/23/2007
Ack! Amazing, brilliant, excellent! Gosh, I don't know if it's just the hour (it's 3am in my part of the world), but I'm so moved. I've only just stumbled into this area of the site and I couldn't stop reading your story. I told myself, okay, I'll stop at chapter 10 then continue in the morning. But I really just couldn't stop reading.
The pain, physical and otherwise, was clenching up my insides. You've got a great climax. And I'm glad you put in portions of Emrys and Morgan's battle. Couldn't help but think Megrim died a little to quick, though... I tried to listen to the song by Annie Lennox but I ended up getting a little distracted. He-he.
It was great of you to give a little backgrounder to the secondary characters. Of course, it was your purpose. All I wanna say is that is was very effective in making me feel a little sadness at Emrys' passing. (Nice names, by the way.)
Short and quick, which I appreciate right now because I want to sleep and if it had been any longer, I wouldn't have been able to close my eyes! But I'm certain that if one day you decided to return and make it a little longer, this would be even more excellent than it already is. I wouldn't mind to read that version either!
Don't stop writing. ;] Fanfic or otherwise, of course. And take care always.
| anime is inuyasha chapter 8 . 11/16/2007
They amuse me with their bickering.
| anime is inuyasha chapter 7 . 11/16/2007
I feel so bad for Sarah.
| anime is inuyasha chapter 6 . 11/16/2007