| Reviews for Without Your Heartbeat |
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   kittymoon14 chapter 15 . 9/21/2007 i feel like i am reading out a wonderful book. i can't wait for the next chapter. i went no! when i got to this chapter! |
| ScarletArtist chapter 15 . 9/20/2007 You've got a great talent for keeping the story going and maintaining the reader's interest through the chapter. |
| notwritten chapter 15 . 9/20/2007 A very interesting chapter. Can you write more please. |
| FelicityHuffmanFan chapter 15 . 9/20/2007 Another great chapter! I can't believe Jareth finally told her he loved her then left! |
| angeloneous chapter 15 . 9/20/2007 This is a really great story! I love that you aren't feeling the need to rush everything - *snap* Sarah loves Jareth after only 3.4 days... Keep up the great work - I look forward to future chapters. |
| AvitarGirl chapter 15 . 9/20/2007 wow, that's intense! Did i mention you are a really good writer? lol, i really do love this story! Please update again soon! |
| Hikari Schezar chapter 15 . 9/20/2007 Have I said how much I love that you update so freaking fast? Because I do. *is torn between worrying and going OMG CUTENESS* *settles for doing both* |
| Unimaginable Possibilities chapter 15 . 9/20/2007 Wow. I just stumbled across this (being in the Labyrinth section of fanfiction for the first time), and looking for something good to read. I couldn't stop reading it! This story is so great. I absolutely love the plot twist and how much Jareth cares for her, and I was rooting for her to finally return his love. By the end of this chapter, it seems like she possibly will. Yea! Eager to read what happens next... Update soon! _ |
| notwritten chapter 14 . 9/19/2007 That was very nice chapter to read. You must do more please. |
| Moon-Goddess-Lee chapter 14 . 9/19/2007 i love the chapter and i hope sarah doesnt die please. Well cant wait till the next chapter is posted!:) |
| FelicityHuffmanFan chapter 14 . 9/19/2007 Beautiful Chapter...Keep it up! |
| Hikari Schezar chapter 14 . 9/19/2007 *sniffles and looks for tissue* Darn you for distracting me with a new chapter when I should be doing work :P I can;t believe you updated so fast though! *does happy dance* Now it just makes me want to read more, I have to know what happens! |
| AvitarGirl chapter 14 . 9/19/2007 aw. Sarah can't die! She has to fall in love with him! |
| Hikari Schezar chapter 13 . 9/19/2007 Just HAD to login for this, and it's been...well a long time since I last did. I wanted to to tell you that I absolutely LOVE your story and I hope you keep writing it and update soon! It's just so sweet and amazing and makes me laugh and be worried all at the same time. It stinks when good stories just don't get updated anymore so I decided to leave a review in hopes that this one won't end up that way :) I'll be watching for new chappies! (Adds to story alert list) |
| Welshteen chapter 13 . 9/17/2007 this is really interesting update soon |