|Reviews for Delete, Deny, Retry|
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/14
You've posted in html.
| Marilyn s. Maelwys chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
yes... you can't easily forget Bourne after any encounter can you? Unless you're dead, which is quite likely...
Yes of course his name is all over the news. Now are they going to meet by accident or does he need help or what this is kind of floatingly plotless...
| Marilyn s. Maelwys chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Not enough Nicky/Jason? Hah, you have no idea how deluded that sounds...
| darkeyesgirl chapter 2 . 2/15/2009
cant wait for next. love this couple
| kitkatbaby611 chapter 2 . 1/11/2008
Nice! Keep it up. )
| Frust-sheep chapter 2 . 11/6/2007
Please update your story. It is too good and it would be so sad, if the story is unfinished. Please, please, please. :)
| itra chapter 2 . 10/30/2007
i hope you update soon
| flower213 chapter 2 . 9/16/2007
Really good! I love how she can't get over him!
| 6StringSamurai13 chapter 2 . 9/14/2007
Awesome chapter. I liked the movie but the ending with Nicky smiling was hopeful but annoying at the same time. Great job of writing a very believable story for where Nicky went after the movie. Very good job on her characterization. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for another chapter!
| Maxennce chapter 2 . 9/6/2007
you cant leave it like this, keep it up, please for the love of all things holy
| SpyPrincess chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
Vwey good, continue
| noro chapter 2 . 9/2/2007
great chapter update soon lookin forward to the next chapter
| PhoenixFeatherQueens chapter 2 . 9/2/2007
post more soon.
| Aria DeLoncray chapter 2 . 8/31/2007
Great story! Update soon.
| TealMoon chapter 2 . 8/29/2007
Hi - thanks for writing this story. I really like Nicky and don't think she had enough storyline in the movie, so I'm glad you had the idea to write from her POV. The writing is much better than the usual internet fare - thanks for using a spell-checker! I like seeing her as a smart, capable woman able to fend for herself. Jason just let her walk away, because (I assume) Nicky had the training to hide. I would like to know more about why Nicky never acted on her feelings for David/Jason. It wasn't like he was in another relationship (at least it didn't appear that way.) Of course, I want Nicky to get together with Jason, so I hope you make this happen. Now for some nits. No idea what kind of job Nicky has at the college, a "a psychology job" doesn't mean anything to me. Besides, a university would demand that she verify her degree - they would contact her college to see if she did graduate. So, Nicky would have to develop a better background for herself; she could certainly hack her way into a university and create a student profile and degree credentials, etc. Another quibble to me is this statement "Nicky had already developed a routine." - Wow! From my casual reading of books on this topic, this is the exact opposite of what a trained spy would do. A third quibble; to make a good story, you need tension and this story lacks it. Lots of emotion from Nicky but she has no fear. If I were on the run from the CIA, I think I'd be scared at some level all the time. - Please don't take these notes in a bad way. If I didn't like your story, and want to see more, I wouldn't have wasted my time (and yours!) commenting on it. Please do continue writing!