Reviews for Rejection of Love can kill you
1414artemis14 chapter 37 . 9/14
This was awesooooome thank you for an great adventure.
It was one of them best stories I have ever read and I am glad that I clicked it.
1414artemis14 chapter 25 . 9/14
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY, WHYYYYYYYYY
1414artemis14 chapter 5 . 9/14
Awwwwww
Guest chapter 37 . 3/20
omg, AH- MAZING!
Guest chapter 37 . 3/16
Oh. My. Fucking. God. That was a goddamn roller coaster. I want to scream for a million years. So much emotion, Merlin, I cannot handle it. That. Was. So. Chaotic. Oh. My. God. Congratulations, you made me cry. To be completely honest though, there were some chapters that kind of made me unsure if I wanted to continue reading. Not because of the dark or sad side of it, definitely not (I got through Twist & Shout after all). But it sort of felt like some things were rushed just to get to the ending. Overall, I liked it enough to have hope (otherwise I wouldn't have finished it) and I thank you. I am aware it was been a while since you wrote this and I'm sure your writing skills have advanced and that pleases me greatly. I hope you still enjoy writing.
~J.A. Temple
MissLuciusNightWings chapter 1 . 1/24
wow. love u
MissLuciusNightWings chapter 1 . 1/24
wow. love u
MissLuciusNightWings chapter 1 . 1/24
wow. love u
Guest chapter 7 . 3/21/2015
Hagrid is an idiot...
platinum.and.raven chapter 37 . 3/16/2015
Love this story! Great writing and plot throughout!
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 12 . 1/31/2015
Story seems a bit fast pace, but that could be because there's really not anything going on around them to do with school.
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 1 . 1/31/2015
Interesting never read about that happening in a Veela story.
cantstopreadingfanfictions chapter 37 . 12/31/2014
it was really nice...quite touching...loved it!
Calmzone1 chapter 7 . 7/27/2014
I am enjoying your different Veela story - however, if you don't want to turn your readers off or have them laughing their asses off while reading love scenes... look up the difference in spelling and definition of 'withering' and 'writhing' - same letters, different arrangement, and when used incorrectly, as you have done, creates 'LMAO' responses.
You are actually a strong writer. However, all writers must learn to proofread, not totally depend on beta readers. If you were ever to submit a story to a real publishing house, they DO pay attention and count errors because they have to pay copy editors to proof read and correct mistakes, and that comes out of your pocket, not theirs- so if you have too many or don't know correct word usage of fairly simple words, you wouldn't get published. :) Good luck with your writing, I am going to continue reading now
AliceCullen3 chapter 37 . 6/20/2014
LOVE IT!
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