Reviews for Between the Lines
MrBenzedrine chapter 7 . 6/17
WOW great chapter and great read thus far
Shaggy chapter 22 . 2/28
I believe I'm done with this story. It's a well written and great story but I've some issues with certain plot developments. I am not a big fan of Ron and I do love Hermione and Harry pairing. You had Ron go to far for greed over wanting Hermione to let him live. Walking out and leaving can be redeemed but turning them in and it leading to Hermione's torture would be unforgivable. If I was Harry I'd have killed him myself for that. Now for the final straw , my favorite character in the whole series is Luna. Pairing her with Ron is God awfull. He is to narrow minded/pig headed to even listen to Hermione's clear logic. How could anyone imagine him working with Luna? She would need a person happy to get into her love of obscure magizoology with her. Just throwing her to Ron so he has someone in the wake of Hermione is just awfull to me. Hell only person I think is actually suited to Ron is lavender ... But this story is good just not for me.
AnthonyC22 chapter 18 . 1/19
That's one way to escape Voldemort... By confusing the hell out of them. And hopefully Dobby pulled a fast one on them.
AnthonyC22 chapter 17 . 1/19
Ahahaha, I LOL'd when Ron said that "Cat got your tongue" line!
dave1887 chapter 25 . 6/3/2015
Hi. Just read the whole story in a couple of days and it's really great. Obviously this type of story is difficult to write whilst remaining realistic but you've done a great job. Plus I like the way you weren't too harsh on Ron, as some Harry/Hermione fanfics can be (I still value Harry and Ron's friendship, and like to think Harry/Hermione could happen whilst the 3 of them remain friends - you've done well to write this into your story!). I noticed the last update was in 2011 and therefore I'm assuming you're no longer continuing with it. This is a shame, as it was very well written and the content was gripping. I hope you one day manage to wrap it up and end with a world much better than the canon epilogue, which was frankly quite depressing to me! My only regret was that Dobby didn't make it back to Shell Cottage and his grave in your story :(. Either way, great work on the story and I hope you one day complete it. Thanks for a great read!
midnightscar17 chapter 25 . 4/1/2015
Update your story please
PumpsSass chapter 14 . 1/20/2015
That was so hot! I wish there was more, I really crave fanfics with D/s H/Hr! There are very few of them. This one is good, and what I like the most is it is not PWP. Great job!
Philosophize chapter 25 . 11/26/2014
Please don't abandon this!
Gunreal chapter 15 . 11/13/2014
Guest chapter 25 . 8/6/2014
Please update again...
Guest chapter 15 . 7/30/2014
I normally don't review fanfiction and you problay arnt gonna finish this story but whatever I'm doing it anyways. I'm about halfway done with what you've written and I'm very impressed. I especially like your handeling of Ron, all to often authors just have harry and hermiones brush of Ron like he wasn't an important part of their lives. Also for not thinking you're good at writing smut it's surprisingly good
J.K Holdenwood chapter 25 . 7/16/2014
A very simple but entertaining story! I hope everything is allright in RL.

The last Chapter: I notice Hermione said Voldermort and nothing happened :) The snatchers should drop by the shell cottage or did Bill ward the cottage better?
It's a pleasure to read your story so please continue! for us and you :)
TheShiningStar chapter 25 . 12/1/2013
TheShiningStar chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
I like this so far!
lyaser53 chapter 25 . 6/24/2013
I'm really enjoying this story...I do hope you will keep writing it!
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