Reviews for Between the Lines
midnightscar17 chapter 25 . 4/1
Update your story please
PumpsSass chapter 14 . 1/20
That was so hot! I wish there was more, I really crave fanfics with D/s H/Hr! There are very few of them. This one is good, and what I like the most is it is not PWP. Great job!
Philosophize chapter 25 . 11/26/2014
Please don't abandon this!
Gunreal chapter 15 . 11/13/2014
Guest chapter 25 . 8/6/2014
Please update again...
Guest chapter 15 . 7/30/2014
I normally don't review fanfiction and you problay arnt gonna finish this story but whatever I'm doing it anyways. I'm about halfway done with what you've written and I'm very impressed. I especially like your handeling of Ron, all to often authors just have harry and hermiones brush of Ron like he wasn't an important part of their lives. Also for not thinking you're good at writing smut it's surprisingly good
J.K Holdenwood chapter 25 . 7/16/2014
A very simple but entertaining story! I hope everything is allright in RL.

The last Chapter: I notice Hermione said Voldermort and nothing happened :) The snatchers should drop by the shell cottage or did Bill ward the cottage better?
It's a pleasure to read your story so please continue! for us and you :)
TheShiningStar chapter 25 . 12/1/2013
TheShiningStar chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
I like this so far!
lyaser53 chapter 25 . 6/24/2013
I'm really enjoying this story...I do hope you will keep writing it!
lyaser53 chapter 15 . 6/24/2013
It figures Ron the traitor like Petigrew!
lyaser53 chapter 8 . 6/23/2013
Ron forgive them...he best get his head out of his ass!
lyaser53 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
You got that right Ron really wasn't much!
HoosierCullen chapter 25 . 6/4/2013
Great fic and I hope you can come back to it and finish it since it seems you are soo close. I like how you have taken the "Ron leaves and Harry and Hermione get together" idea and put your own romantic spin on it. The shifts from canon are also very well done and I don't think you really need a Beta. Your story flows well and the characters are very well thought out and relateable. I just hope you finish it because like I said it is a good fic and the direction JK should have gone at this point. I guess the only gripe I may have is you let Ron become forgiven by the Golden couple too soon and too easily. He first abandons them because A. he is a jealous prick and B. can't rough it for more than a week with our four squares and a lie in. Then he performs the ultimate betrayal becaus again he is jealous and hands over Harry and Hermione to Voldyshorts. If you pay attention to Harry in the books betrayal is the worst offense you can commit against him. His parents were betrayed by the rat and lost their lives yet he is so quick to forgive a traitor that does the same to him and the witch he loves. Just seems a bit of a stretch to me. Then again I am not a fan of Ron so there you have it. Any way PLEASE come back and grace us with more of this story and I will look forward to it.
thenameisbondbutshane chapter 19 . 6/1/2013
Hey tinsa you wrote a good story with a good plot but you potrayed hermione as a whore in some chapters specially in 19th. Please don't spoil her character if you intend to write another h/hr story.
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