Reviews for Video
thebestAUTHOR chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
You did AWESOME! This was extrmely well written with an inside touch from Edward's P.O.V, this definetly deserves my favourites!
your royal highness chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
oh my edward! god! that was so...emotional! and so EDWARD destroying EVERYTHING...great job at portraying his emotions. the whole 'break the computer in half' thing really added to the whole scene, and him yelling at it...

great job!
BellaTonks chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
I had read this awhile back ago when you first wrote it and I loved it, but unfortunately had not saved it.

But I found it and just wanted to tell that I really really loved it ... very good interpretation of edward's reaction to the video.

A317 chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Excellent. It was very well written, and very vividly described, I could picture perfectly; Edward sitting in the car, breaking his own heart by watching this video. I really liked it, good job!
nyckiii chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
there is no possible way that i could ever hate this

absolutely no way

this was... amzing and im pretty sure u cant improve much more w/ ur writing skills... ;)
not dead yet chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
loved it
xXxeternally yoursxXx chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
i liked it. you should write one of the families reaction when they all watch it later. you are a good writer.
mrs.cullen22 chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
loved it. i always wanted edwards pov of the tape. great job! keep writing!
Dreams Shape the World chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
Aww, that was so good! You definitely have Edward down. And his reactions were so real...who WOULDN'T want to rip James in half, quarters, and then burn him?
Cimbeline chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
I feel truly horrible for not reviewing one of your stories yet, as you've been infallibly faithful to mine for a while.

Anyways, this emotional piece is fantastic. I really love how you've incorporated Edward's thoughts into is so fluidly- and his over-thinking every moment was remarkably in-character. Well done.

Blacktangledheart92 chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
I think that you wrote Edward very well. Great writing.
not done baking chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
This was good, very Edward. You did slip a few times in Edward talk or whatever, but this was still good.
HermioneRon 4ever chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
That was cool! Good job showing Edward's reaction. Very nice! Happy writing!
freak a geek chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
OMG! I loved it. I always wondered what Edward did when he watched the video tape. I guess, hopefully, we'll see what Stephenie Meyer wrote Edward's reaction as. But it was good none the less...a few spelling mistakes, but not that I'm really persnikkity about it and all. Anyways, have a nice day!
MartaSwan chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
oh good! i liked it!


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