Reviews for Sunday Afternoon's
Nalahime chapter 16 . 9/6/2014
This was a really great read! Sure there were spelling mistakes and wrong words used or missing, but one could overlook them and still knew what you wanted to say.
Its an awesome story! I was laughing so often throughout the whole thing and smiling to myself while reading and of course crying like hell... I already figured that Zack was sick, but held onto the hope that he might recover from it, but that cancer... geez, did that give me a blow to the stomach! I was crying non-stop the last two chapter with a very sad and heavy smile at the end. Wonderful emotional written work and worth a read for everyone who likes bitter-sweet endings with sweetness, laughter, absolute insanity till that last moment arrives.
Thanks for writing this and making me recall why I love this pair so much!
dracosfairmaiden chapter 16 . 7/11/2013
I know this story has been here for a while now but I wanted to review it anyway.

It's great that Cloud realized he can move on from Zack's death. The fic comes full circle: it was a Sunday afternoon when Cloud moved there and it was Sunday afternoon when Zack died.

This was a really sweet fic overall :)
Str33t chapter 16 . 3/25/2012
OMG! I soooooo loved this story! :3 But why couldn't you go with a happy ending? I have been crying constantly for the last 3, 4 chapters or something. You did a great job! ;))
UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 16 . 12/11/2011
that was such a beautiful story i got all teary eyed and everything :)
Kimihearts chapter 16 . 11/27/2011
Oh my god! I'm so crying right now! This is SOOOO like a walk to remember! But it was so beautiful! I love it eventhough it's a tearjerker!
heyalove43 chapter 16 . 9/16/2011
This is one of the best stories i have read. I cried a lot when Zack died...but on a happier note i thought Demyx was really funny :) good job on the story
The Fallen Dark Angel chapter 16 . 7/12/2011
Omg I loved it. The ending gave me a strong urge to cry. Well written and well thought out. Great story.
Vermillion Serpent chapter 16 . 7/7/2011
God what to say.. I really want to review because this is such a beautiful story..

My friend found this before me and sent me the link to it and she told me what was ultimately going to happen.. some might say that would ruin it but instead I caught so many things in relation to the end and oh God I was in bits before Zack had even collapsed!

Chapter 10 set me off.. with Cloud's 'I could die I'm so happys' and Zack's 'Until the day I die'...

This made me cry so very much and I mean sobbing hehe but that's a really good thing for me. I got so emotionally attatched to the story it really was amazing. Well done.

Aside from the sadness I also found Demyx really funny, hehe.

Thankyou for such an amazing read.

Loki xxx
SykotecAlpha chapter 16 . 4/13/2011
Your story was very good. It alway kept me guessing, and not many stories can do that anymore. The ending, though, was very difficult for me to read, I'm actually crying right now. There are few fanfictions that are able to do that. Keep up the amazing work with all the other stories, and keep me guessing!
once-upon-a-dream012 chapter 16 . 4/10/2011
I listened to Cancer by my chemical romance while reading this (when you found out he had cancer) and since my family has a wide range of cancer in my family it's affected me. I cried for a whole 20 minutes before i could review. Loved your story thanks for writing it, was beautiful.
Lily-chan76 chapter 16 . 1/28/2011
Okax...firstly! i really liked this storx 3

but next time, u should rather put under 'romance n angst or drama' since there is a dead chara .'

I'm not good with this kind of story ~.~ it depressed me so much... but well~

Thx for writing it!
TheSarcasticDeath chapter 16 . 1/19/2011
So - so saaad! Amazing! But sad...
DanaVII chapter 16 . 11/25/2010
Oh my God... This story... Arg. What I was able to cry... And cry, and cry, again and again... It is crazy, me who had never left a tear for a movie or a book (even not the end of Crisis Core! Why?... I don't know x ' 3), I meet has release of big sobs without anything that I can make! Really, if somebody had seen me in this state, he would have been able to think that I came of loses a close... I does not re-know me (o. O) Et nevertheless, my allergy in English You have to be an incredible writer to pass on me of so beautiful pushed me has to read all the story with Google translation, I let you imagine pathetic quality of the translation... But that of feelings! I had a big plucking in the heart by imagining Zack apologize auprés of Cloud when it had the face in blood in the snow, and then then when we learn that it has a cancer, horrible, and the final blow was when he asks has Aerith whom it is. And the chapter, it was... Arg. " It was has Sunday afternoon when Zack passed away. " We understand better the title of the fic now... But my god, as I am depressed, horrible, even two days aprés to have read this story, I have a big in the heart and my eyes begins has to prickle... You have a real talent to tell the stories, I say to you;) and then on one side, if Zack had not died, this fic would have less touched me, and I would have less loved it... Strange, no? In any case, it was really an incredible adventure. Thank you very mutch :)!

Aw, and sorry for my patetic English, I am not very strong for this language »
Ice Teal chapter 16 . 11/2/2010
Gawd it was amazing. You now hit the record of makin me cry twice within ONE fic .
serenitylite14 chapter 16 . 10/5/2010
This story was amazing! It made me laugh, smile, and cry. There aren't many stories that have brought as much emotion to me as this one did! I applaud you in your way of creating emotion, a story well written, and facing all the other readers who probably sent flames at you when you killed Zack off. I laughed almost the whole way through except for the last two chapters and then I cried until the very end. With all that said...Thank you for writing this story! it was simply amazing!
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