Reviews for First Time
ladybrin chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
you really did a good job with this fic- my poor sweet mcgee-
howzat chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
This is excellent on so many levels I don't know where to start. It's as if you're really there inside the young McGee's head, and I found it deeply touching. "Oh, OK, I suppose I owe you a favour". If only he'd had someone who cared and not someone who mocked him as "geek boy", but his young-man reaction is spot on. Your story left me wishing all sorts of better things for McGee. Loved the sting in the tail.
pryrmtns chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
I"m almost sorry this is a one shot. You've set up an intersting "what-if" scenario.
iheartGibbs chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
Hey oz! I love this story. I can picture it just as you've written it. I feel sad for him. Which is funny, considering. Wonderful storytelling - again!

I know I already commented on NFA, but I also wanted to mention that there are few female writers whose work I have read that can write a scene like this entirely from the male perspective and it ring so true.
Eliche chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
great work.