Good start. That reaction from Danny can't mean anything good.

Keep the good writing.

yeah, please update. its pretty good, but i think you should make your chapters longer, like about two or three pages on microsoft word. oh, and there already is an episode where danny and sam admit their feelings to each other if you didnt notice. (check phantom planet on livevideo.) well, keep up the good work!

Shadow

O... Pretty please continue. :D