Reviews for Burning Arrow, Wildfire Heart
PikaMew1288 chapter 48 . 8/31
To be honest, If I were a Djinn and had the option for Freedom at the cost of Severely reduced powers, I would instead want the ability to CHOOSE who my Master was.
PikaMew1288 chapter 21 . 8/31
I wonder what would happen if a villainous SI were to be placed inside a Metal Shadow robot? Surely they wouldn't have as big an ego as Eggman and Metal Sonic has. Their Ego is what stops them from winning after all not to mention that Sonic is getting stronger as the years go on as shown in Generations where he bested Opponents that he previously needed the Chaos Emeralds to beat yet Metal Sonic still deludes himself that he is superior to Sonic. Sure, it was true when he was first built but now Sonic has surpassed him. And Knuckles was kidnapped after previously berating Sonic for not being observant, sounds about right. I find it stupid how Knuckles seems to think that he can protect the Master Emerald by himself. Keep in mind that Angel Island is so Massive that it took two games to completely explore or one massive game if you are playing "Sonic 3 & Knuckles".
Random-Neo-Fan chapter 48 . 5/5
I know I’m late on giving this fic a review. But good god is this thing AMAZING! The inclusion of the main cast, the beautiful characterizations and story arcs. The story/fanfic:game humor is all incredible. I love every single part of this story! Sonic and the Secret Rings was my first exposure to the sonic games, so I am happy you gave it this novelization. Thank you for this incredible read!
XWLinda266 chapter 48 . 5/3
Awwww I totally love EVERY PART in your story (including Declaimers, they are amusing) and the alternative of Erazor amd Shahra's fate is pretty much better than SEGA's version...yeah heh. Your fic imspires me to write my own one, maybe making the Storybook Series a trilogy(I'll just do the 3rd part)? Also I have gained so much about the ships between Sonic characters from your fics :) love them anyway! Thank you so much Taranea! Now you are the most admirable author of me (blushed and fled)
Shteph chapter 48 . 4/29
Let me just say... this mammoth of a fic was SUCH a pleasure to read. I had honestly strayed from the fanfic world for years, mainly because, well, life gets in the way and its hard to find well written (especially Sonic) fics. But with being stuck in quarantine during this crazy time we're living in (and after dusting off some old Sonic games and binge playing them), I had decided to take a peep for the fun of it and graze through. I remember reading the first few chapters of this years ago, and when I stumbled upon it again it was like a faint light had reignited inside me. So much nostalgia came rushing back and all at once I remembered just why I used to love so much reading about our blue blur.
After reading this fic in its entirety, you single-handedly gave me the motivation to create an account (which even back in the day when I was on here all the time, I never had the balls to do) and start diving back into this wonderful world!
You have such a talent for story telling. I love love love the way you portray all the characters, honestly so spot on in my opinion. The banter, the character development, the comedy, the action, the emotion... just... beautifully done, standing ovation. And I'm also obsessed with how you switched it up from the original game plot, such a better way to end everything, YOU SHOULD WORK FOR SEGA! *starts petition*
You have set the bar high my friend, please keep up the amazing work, you are a national treasure.
Thank you!
Starfire-028 chapter 48 . 3/14
So hey it's 5AM and I just finished binge-reading this whole fic after realizing it was finally complete. I've read most of this fic multiple times, been here since maybe the early chapter 20s (old reader, new reviewer, I'm afraid, oof) and the latest chapter I'd read up to now was maybe 41 or so. Checking back at random and finding not only new material that I'd somehow missed but also that wonderful COMPLETE label quite literally made me squeal aloud, it's so so fantastic to see it done - and so spectacularly, too! The humor, the angst, the feels, the TEAMWORK abaskdnfasldfj MY HEART these last few chapters omg. Thank you so much for hanging in there to wrap everything up, even if it seems it took you 12 years to do so; the wait was ABSOLUTELY worth it! ;v;
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Jack0lanterns chapter 48 . 12/26/2019
Aww...I didn't expect that kind of ending, especially for Shahra and Erazor.

This has been a truly fun ride that got a lot of emotions - and laughs - out of me (like captain Jack Shadow. Especially Captain Jack Shadow. I will forever have that branded into my mind lol). I liked the constant, underlying sense of urgency and fear throughout the whole story regarding the arrow in Sonic's chest, even during the more light-hearted moments. It kept it realistic, which is often difficult to do with a main character that seems to be in a perpetual state of wisecracking positivity.

Despite no longer being in the Sonic fandom, this was still one of my favourite stories, and I'll be keeping an eye out for whatever you post next. Great work! :)
HikariKitsune02 chapter 48 . 12/2/2019
I read this story when it began.

It only makes sense to read it when it finished.

Fantastic. That's all I can really say. An absolutely wonderful adaptation of a game that was kind of meh. And now I want to replay it, thanks to this story.
ShadAmy1Fan - Shylah McVey chapter 48 . 11/22/2019
This ending was SO perfect! I loved it. It was everything it needed to be. You are SUCH an amazing and talented writer. Thank you!
Blue-Raven-Universe chapter 48 . 11/21/2019
This ending was really good. I was wondering how you would approach the ending of this game. Though it was different, I really enjoyed it. Especially Shahra, I'm so happy that she got her own happy ending and got to be with Erazor again.
Can't wait to see more of your works in the future !
ImKoala chapter 48 . 11/18/2019
now THAT was a great story. Thank you so much for such a wonderful adventure.

This has been so much fun to read and to completely dive into this epic. As always, gonna be a huge fan and can only hope, to do you and your story justice. -TheGingerSaiyan
DEV chapter 48 . 11/18/2019
Heh, da wären wir also, eine weitere Story erfolgreich abgeschlossen. Das muss sich gerade nach so einer langen Zeit so befriedigend anfühlen, Glückwunsch, dass du diese wundervolle Geschichte bis zum Ende durchgezogen und vor allem auch bis zum Ende ununterbrochen unterhaltsam und lesenswert gestaltet hast. Hat extrem Spaß gemacht dieses besondere Secret Rings-Abenteuer rund um Sonic und seine Freunde zu verfolgen :D

Aber natürlich musste ganz am Ende nochmal ein besonders überraschender Curveball folgen: Sogar Erazor bekommt unerwartet ein Happy End, nicht übel ;)

Mir gefiel die Szene gerade am Anfang sehr, als Sonic nachdem er Erazor wohlverdient die Leviten gelesen hatte bereits dabei war seinen letzten Wunsch auszusprechen um das Schicksal des Bösewichten auf die selbe Art zu besiegeln wie er es bereits im Spiel selbst gemacht hat, als er iin dieser Szene alleine war. Aber Pustekuchen, die Anwesenheit seiner Freunde haben den Lauf der Dinge verändert, sie waren ein positiver Einfluss der dafür gesorgt hat, dass Sonic trotz seiner Wut nach einer spannenden Diskussion (sowie wenig hilfreichen Einwürfen von Eggman :P ) von seinem ursprünglichen Vorhaben tatsächlich abgebracht werden konnte. Ein letztes meisterhaftes Beispiel dafür, wie sehr diverse aus dem Spiel bekannten Ereignisse von der Anwesenheit der engsten Gefährten des Helden beeinflusst werden können, eine sehr gelungene Umsetzung.

Damit fällt das Ende tatsächlich auch etwas zufriedenstellender aus als im Original. Erazor war ein Mistkerl sondergleichen, aber gerade nach seiner ziemlich miesen Vergangenheit ist es zumindest verständlich, warum er sich letztendlich zu einem derart herzlosen Monster entwickelt hat. Ihm also eine zweite Chance zu gewähren ist letztendlich sehr passend für eine Franchise, die in sehr vielen Fällen auch das Konzept der Vergebung als zentrales Erzählthema benutzt - wie du ohnehin mit Perfect Chaos oder Shadow zwei akkurate Beispiele verwendet hast. Er und Shahra leben jetzt hoffentlich glücklich gemeinsam bis in alle Zeit - ein perfektes Happy End, wie es direkt im Märchenbuch stehen könnte ;)

Das letzte Kapitel hatte nochmal alles, Spannung als es darum ging wie letztendlich mit dem bösen Djinn verfahren wird, humorvolle Einlagen zwischendurch, und natürlich einen wunderschönen Abschluss, speziell hinsichtlich Shahra die ein gutes Ende natürlich mehr als verdient hatte. Und die letzten zwei große Lacher der Story gehen natürlich an Shadow der mysteriöserweise seinen Piratenhut mitgehen ließ und die Art, wie Eggman im wahrsten Sinne des Wortes aus dieser Geschichte geworfen wurde. Wohlverdient, trotz all seiner Proteste :P

Abschließend kann ich mich nur nochmal bei dir für diese tolle Story bedanken, für all die Mühe und Zeit die du in dieses Werk gesteckt hast um uns alle damit zu unterhalten. Ganz viel Erfolg weiterhin für all deine weiteren Projekte, die ich natürlich nach wie vor mit Spannung erwarten und verfolgen werde :D

(Sonic and the Black Knight-Adaption kommt jetzt total als nächstes, nicht? *Nudge Nudge* :P )
Meddler98 chapter 48 . 11/13/2019
this ending was well worth the wait! i loved following this story over the years, and i cant wait to read the entire thing in one go now! amazing job!
Infinite's Ruby chapter 48 . 11/12/2019
First of all, I'm sorry I didn't get a chance to review the last chapter mostly due to the fact I was recovering from an operation.

So, we finally come to the end of this story. I greatly enjoyed the ending and I was caught by surprise by the changes in the last couple of chapters. One of my favorite parts is the interactions between Sonic and his friends and the humor is fantastic as there were several moments in the chapter which made me chuckle.

Congratulations on completing this story! I'm glad to have found this story and I enjoyed the story. I hope you enjoy your long break, you certainly deserve it. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
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